每日口說挑戰【人文歷史考題】兩河流域古文明 (Ancient Mesopotamia | Early Civilizations | World History | Khan Academy)

Day 219
Not only do we have these technological and architectural advancements, their religion, their writing has influenced civilization since, for the last five, six, seven thousand years.

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The script is here: http://bit.ly/2V7mlMH

First, let’s focus on our sentence of the day. This is the original sentence in the video:

Not only do we have these technological and architectural advancements, their religion, their writing has influenced civilization since, for the last five, six, seven thousand years.

A "grammatically correct" version in writing would be:

NOT ONLY do we have these technological and architectural advancements, BUT their religion AND their writing HAVE (ALSO) influenced civilization FOR the last five, six, seven thousand years.

Please note that in speech, certain words are sometimes omitted because the speaker assumes everyone knows them. Speakers also make minor "mistakes."

Do not omit "but" in “not only...but also” when you are writing.

http://www.learnerhall.org/2012/10/not-only-but-also-b.html

https://dictionary.cambridge.org/zht/%E8%AA%9E%E6%B3%95/%E8%8B%B1%E5%BC%8F%E8%AA%9E%E6%B3%95/word-order-and-focus/not-only-but-also

I think you need more in-depth (完整的，徹底的，全面的,深入的）content.

* an in-depth reportㄧ個詳細的報導

*Synonyms of “in-depth ”: comprehensive, thorough

Technological advances 技術進步
Technological innovation 技術創新

Technological advances and computing and telecommunications (科技進步、電腦運算和通訊）have reduced the need for many people to travel to work.

Architectural design 建築設技
Architectural plans建築計劃
Architectural feature 建築特色

Energy saving features are the highlights of this architectural design.節能功能是這個建築設計的亮點

Advancement is a development and improvement of something

Career advancement 職業發展
Advancement in science 科學進步

The new technological advancement greatly improves(大幅改善） people’s lives.

Western civilization 西方文明
Ancient civilization 古代文明
Modern civilization 現代文明

Some people think that nuclear war would mean the end of modern civilizations(核戰意味現代文明的終結）.

A code of conduct 行爲手冊
A code of law/ A law code 法規

There were plans to introduce a dress code for civil servants(為公務人員引進服裝規定）.

☺Not only do we have these technological and architectural advancements, their religion, their writing has influenced civilization since, for the last five, six, seven thousand years.
我們不但擁有這些科技上、建築上的進展，他們的宗教信仰、寫作也影響了近五、六、七千年來的文明。
【心得】我一看到主題是人文歷史，我就覺得耳屎似乎力馬堵塞住我的耳朵，影片講的內容一整個無法傳導到我的大腦:p
■technological [tɛknəˋlɑdʒɪk!] 技術的；關於(或涉及)技術的；科技的
■architectural [͵ɑrkəˋtɛktʃərəl] 建築的；建築學的
■advancement [ədˋvænsmənt] 發展、進展；提高、增加；改善；預付款項
■civilization[͵sɪv!əˋzeʃən] 文明社會；(特定時期特定社會或國家的) 文明；文化
(現代生活的)文明設施；開化、教化(過程)

結果昨天中午收到遺珠信了 QQQ
其實空服員不是我的夢想
只是評估自己目前狀況覺得可以嘗試
本來想說錄取就不去日本打工度假
看來是天意不讓我浪費簽證XDD
不過面試當天真的很競爭
每個應徵者都超美
這次經驗也讓我學到該加強的部分

@invention01083@V@李心嫺@undefined 謝謝你們！
@小柿子 我六月也要跟家人搭日航哈哈
@Celeste@Wan Tzu 希望不只日本我可以出現在往各國的飛機上 (?

好像要改成這樣比較合乎文法吧？
their religion and their writing have influenced...


Not only do we have these technological and architectural advancements, their religion, their writing has influenced civilization since, for the last five, six, seven thousand years.

Not only do we have these technological (little pause)and architectural advancements(go down), their religion, their writing(rise) has influenced civilization since(stress), for the last five, six, seven(#^&*$#@) thousand years.

Not only do we have these technological and architectural advancements, their religion, their writing has influenced civilization since, for the last five, six, seven thousand years.

Not only do we have these technological and architectural advancements, their religion, their writing has influenced civilization since, for the last five, six, seven thousand years.

準備登出，換工作倒數!!!


[NOTE]
Not only do we have these technological and architectural advancements, their religion, their writing has influenced civilization since, for the last five, six, seven thousand years.

我們不只有了這些科技、建築進展，他們的宗教信仰、寫作也影響了之後五、六、七千年的文明。

句子選自此影片 : 【人文歷史考題】兩河流域古文明 (Ancient Mesopotamia | Early Civilizations | World History | Khan Academy)


1. _
* technological [tɛknəˋlɑdʒɪk!] (adj.) 技術的；關於（或涉及）技術的
- relating to technology which is defined as new machines equipment and ways of doing things that are based on Modern knowledge about science and computers.
- Technological advances in Computing and Telecommunications have reduced the need for many people to travel to work.
+ 計算機和電信技術的進步減少了許多人前往工作的需要。

2. _
* architectural [͵ɑrkəˋtɛktʃərəl] (adj.) 建築的；建築學的
- It means relating to architecture which is defined as the style and design of a building or buildings.
- Energy saving features are the highlights of this architectural design.
+ 節能功能是這種建築設計的亮點。

3. _
* advancement [ədˋvænsmənt] (n.) 發展；提高；改善
- To develop or to improve.
- The new technological advancements greatly improve people's lives.
+ 新的技術進步極大地改善了人們的生活。

4. _
* civilization [͵sɪv!əˋzeʃən] (n.) 文明社會；(特定時期特定社會或國家的) 文明；文化
- Some people think that nuclear war would mean the end of modern civilization.
+ 有些人認為核戰爭意味著現代文明的終結。

5. _
* code [kod] (n.) 密碼；代號；代碼
- To accepted as a general principles or a set of written rules. That say how people in a particular country or organization should act and behave.
- code of conduct, code of law
- There were plans to introduce a dress code for civil service.
+ 有計劃引入公務員著裝要求。