Name: 雅思寫作怎麼拿七分？ (5 Tips to Get Band 7 in the IELTS Writing Exam - IELTS Writing Lesson)
Uploaded: 2018-11-06T04:48:45.000Z
Duration: 21 min 21 s

If you've taken the IELTS exam many times,
and you can't seem to get higher than six

如果你參加過多次雅思考試。
而你似乎不能得到超過6個。

in the writing exam, this video is for you.

在寫作考試中，這個視頻是為你準備的。

If you're stuck at band six, then it's
likely that you have some bad habits and ineffective

如果你被卡在第六段，那麼就是
很可能你有一些不良的習慣和無效的。

These are things that might work well at band
six, but they won't help you to get band

這些都是可能在樂隊中很好用的東西
六，但他們不會幫助你得到帶。

I'll show you what these ineffective habits
are, and how you can change them.

我來告訴你，這些無效的習慣是什麼？
是，以及如何改變它們。

One point: I'll be focusing on the academic
IELTS exam in this video, because most of

有一點：我將重點關注學術的
在這個視頻中，雅思考試，因為大部分的

我遇到的學生需要學術性的雅思。

If you're taking general IELTS, most of
the advice in this video is still very relevant

如果你考的是普通雅思，大部分的
在這個視頻的建議仍然是非常相關的

Also, one more thing: there's nothing wrong
with getting band six!

另外，還有一件事：沒有什麼不對的地方
與得到帶六！

I'm not trying to be rude or discouraging
to anyone.

我並不是要無禮或勸阻你。
給任何人。

When I say that something is a bad habit,
or that you need to change something, I mean

當我說某件事情是個壞習慣。
或你需要改變的東西，我的意思是

if you want to get band 7.0 in the IELTS writing
exam.

如果你想在雅思寫作中獲得7.0段的成績，你就必須要在雅思寫作中獲得7.0段的成績。
考。

The IELTS scoring system is very specific.

雅思的評分體系是非常具體的。

The examiners don't just look at your writing
and say, “Hmmm, this feels like a… six!”

考官不只是看你的文筆而已
然後說，"嗯，這感覺就像一個... 六！"

If you get band six in the IELTS writing exam,
there are specific reasons why.

如果你在雅思寫作考試中拿到了六段。
是有具體原因的。

There are specific things which you did or
didn't do which explain your score.

有具體的事情，你做了或
沒有做這解釋你的分數。

Similarly, to get band seven, there are specific
things you need to do, and not do!

同樣，要想獲得第七段，也有特定的
你需要做的和不需要做的事情!

Most importantly: these things are very different
between bands six and seven.

最重要的是：這些東西是非常不同的
在第六和第七段之間。

If you keep taking IELTS, and you keep getting
band six in the writing, then you can't

如果你一直在考雅思，而且你一直在獲得
頻段六的寫作，那麼你就不能

keep doing the same things and expect to get
a different score.

The things you need to do to get band seven
in your IELTS writing aren't magic or some

你需要做的事情，以獲得帶七。
在你的雅思寫作中，並不是魔法或一些。

I highly recommend you read the scoring criteria
and think about what band seven means.

我強烈建議你閱讀評分標準
並思考波段七是什麼意思。

At the very least, you need to understand
that your IELTS writing score is made up of

至少，你需要了解
你的雅思寫作成績是由以下幾點組成的

four different parts: task achievement, coherence
and cohesion, lexical resource (which means

四個不同的部分：任務實現、一致性
和凝聚力，詞彙資源（指的是

現在想一想：你最薄弱的地方在哪裡？

What do you need to work on from these four
areas?

從這四個方面來看，你需要努力的是什麼？
地區？

In the rest of this lesson, we'll talk about
each of these four areas.

在本課的其他部分，我們將討論一下
這四個領域中的每一個領域。

You'll see common examples of 'band six
thinking', and you'll see how you can

你會看到常見的 "帶六 "的例子。
思想"，你會看到你如何能

improve your approach to get a higher IELTS
writing score.

改進方法，提高雅思成績
寫分數。

Here are the some ideas that are great for
getting band six:

以下是一些非常適合的想法
獲得第六段。

“In task one, I need to include every statistic
and piece of data.”

"在任務一中，我需要把每一個統計數字都包括進去
和一塊數據"。

“In task two, I just need to write something
about the general topic in the question.”

"在任務二中，我只需要寫點東西
關於問題中的一般話題。"

By the way, to save myself saying 'task
achievement' again and again, I'm going

順便說一句，為了省得我說 "任務
成績'一次又一次，我去

Getting band 7 for TA is both easy and hard.

Here's why it's easy: you just need to
do everything which the question asks you

這就是為什麼它很容易：你只需要
照單全收

Here's why it's hard: most people can't
do that without a lot of practice.

這就是為什麼它很難：大多數人不能
做到這一點，無需大量的練習。

TA is also slightly different for task one
and task two, so we'll talk about those

任務一的TA也略有不同
和任務二，所以我們將討論這些問題。

The graph below shows the sales of five different
food products in the UK between 1980 and 2010.

下圖顯示了五種不同的銷售情況
1980年至2010年間，英國的食品。

Summarise the information by selecting and
reporting the main features, and make comparisons

選擇並總結資訊。
報告主要特點，並進行比較

If you want some time to look at the question,
pause the video.

如果你想有時間看看這個問題。
暫停視頻。

If you're watching on YouTube, you can see
the question on the full version of this lesson

如果你在YouTube上觀看，你可以看到。
本課完整版的問題

on our website: Oxford Online English dot
com.

在我們的網站上。牛津在線英語網
com。

Getting a good TA score depends a lot on what
you do before you start writing.

獲得一個好的TA成績，很大程度上取決於什麼？
在你開始寫作之前，你做。

You need to analyse the task and make a clear
plan.

你需要分析任務，並做出明確的。
計劃。

If you start writing without a clear plan,
it's very hard to get a good TA score.

如果你沒有一個明確的計劃就開始寫作。
要想取得TA的好成績是非常困難的。

In task one, it's important to find connections
or trends in the information you're given.

在任務一中，重要的是要找到聯繫
或你所得到的資訊的趨勢。

For example, in this question, how could you
connect the data?

例如，在這道題中，你怎麼能
連接數據？

Here's one idea: you could group the five
products into, first, products whose sales

這裡有一個想法：你可以把五個
產品成，首先，產品的銷售

fell over the period (ice cream and frozen
burgers), secondly, products whose sales rose

在這一時期下降了（冰激凌和冷凍食品）。
漢堡），二是銷售量上升的產品。

(tofu and chili sauce) and finally, products
whose sales stayed the same (salted peanuts).

(豆腐和辣椒醬)，最後是產品。
其銷量保持不變（鹹花生）。

Here's another suggestion: group the five
products into big sellers (ice cream, frozen

另一個建議是：把這五個
產品成為大賣品（冰激凌、冷凍食品等）。

burgers, and also chili sauce at the end of
the period), and small sellers (tofu, salted

漢堡，還有辣椒醬在最後的
期），以及小賣家（豆腐、鹹菜）。

peanuts, chili sauce at the beginning of the
period).

花生、辣椒醬在開始的時間
期）。)

Actually, there isn't one correct way to
do this, but you need to do something.

其實，並沒有一個正確的方法來
但你需要做一些事情。

You can't just write about each product,
one after another.

你不能只寫每個產品。
一個接一個。

Well, you can, but you'll probably get band
six for TA!

好吧，你可以，但你可能會得到的樂隊
六個給TA!

Whatever data you're given, you need to
find connections and put the information into

無論給你什麼數據，你都需要。
找關係，把資訊放到

These groups will be separate paragraphs in
your answer.

這些組別將作為單獨的段落
你的答案。

This is how your answer will have structure,
which is also important for your coherence

這樣你的答案才會有結構。
這對你的連貫性也很重要

The most common problem in task two is leaving
something out or not covering something fully.

任務二中最常見的問題是離開
漏掉的東西或沒有完全覆蓋的東西。

To get band 7 for TA, you need to do all of
the things the question is asking you to do,

要想獲得TA的7段，你需要做到以下幾點
問題要求你做的事情。

and only the things the question is asking
you to do.

而只有問題所問的東西
你要做的。

The task says, 'discuss both of these viewpoints.'

First, you need to discuss the idea 'that
young people benefit from working while studying

首先，你需要討論 "那個 "的想法。
青年人從邊工作邊學習中受益

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