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  • Peanut butter is one things that gets the mind going in interesting directions.

    花生醬是一種會讓人心走向一個奇妙方向的東西

  • Hey, there.

    嗨!大家好

  • It's Marie Forleo and you are watching MarieTV,

    我是 Marie Forleo,你正在收看 MarieTV

  • the place to be to create a business and a life that you love.

    一個打造理想事業與生活的地方

  • Now, if you're looking for some small tweaks that you can make

    現在,如果你正在尋找一些你能做到的小撇步

  • to help you connect more powerfully with your customers, this is the episode for you.

    可以用來幫你有效地連結顧客,這集就是為你而做的

  • Today's question comes from Dr. Cheryl, a clinical psychologist and couples therapist

    今天的問題來自 Dr. Cheryl,一位臨床心理學家和伴侶治療師

  • who is also a member of B-School and The Copy Cure.

    他也是商學院和 The Copy Cure 的一員

  • Now, I was cruising through the member comments when I found Dr. Cheryl's question

    我是在瀏覽會員評論時找到 Dr. Cheryl 的問題

  • and I thought it was the perfect opportunity for some copywriting before and after.

    我想這是一個展示廣告文宣修改前後差別的絕佳機會

  • Dr. Cheryl wrote:

    Dr. Cheryl 寫道:

  • Hi, everyone.

    大家好

  • I created my site 15 months ago without the benefit of this program.

    15 個月前,在沒有這個計畫的支持下,我創建了我的網站

  • I love the design of my site.

    我喜歡我的網站的設計

  • I wanted it uncluttered, welcoming, and not overwhelming.

    我想要它整齊、受歡迎,但又不是太受歡迎

  • But I know I need some changes.

    但是我知道我需要一些改變

  • Any constructive thoughts?

    有什麼建設性的想法嗎?

  • Now, you guys know me.

    你們了解我

  • Of course I had some thoughts, which I'm going to share with you in a moment,

    當然我個人是有些想法,稍後會分享給你

  • but here's what's really great for you.

    但接下來這個真的對你有幫助

  • These ideas are applicable to virtually anyone who uses words for their job or their business.

    這些想法適用於幾乎任何在工作、生意方面要使用文字的人

  • And they're all based on a subtle but important shift

    它們都是根據一個微妙但重要的改變基礎

  • that instantly helps you connect better with your audience and likely increase business.

    能立刻幫你有效連結你的觀眾,且可能增進你的事業發展

  • It's called the spotlight method and it's based on one simple idea.

    它叫做鎂光燈法,是根據一個簡單的想法

  • In business, the spotlight can either be on you or your customers.

    在商業運作中,鎂光燈可以是在你或者顧客身上

  • Meaning if the spotlight's on you, the focus of your words is likely on your passion,

    也就是說,如果鎂光燈在你身上,你的文字就有可能聚焦在你的熱情、

  • your cleverness, and your goals.

    才智和目標

  • However, when you shift that spotlight over to your customer, the focus of your words

    然而,當你將鎂光燈轉移到你的顧客,你的文字就會聚焦

  • is on the people you serve: their problems, their aspirations, and their goals.

    在那些你所服務的人:他們的問題、渴望和目標

  • Now, unfortunately most of us get this wrong, especially when it comes to our writing.

    而不幸的是,我們大部分人都搞錯了,特別是關於我們的寫作

  • Generally speaking, we all shine way too much of that spotlight on ourselves

    一般來說,我們身上的鎂光燈太多

  • and not enough spotlight on our customers.

    而顧客身上的鎂光燈則不足

  • But in business we know our customers want to feel seen and heard and acknowledged.

    但在生意上,我們知道顧客想要被看見、被聆聽、被知曉

  • So an easy way to do that is to make sure you're putting them in the spotlight,

    一個簡單的方法就是確保你把他們都放在鎂光燈下

  • and that's what I'm gonna show you how to do.

    而那就是我將展示給你們看的

  • So we're gonna walk through a few specific changes we can make on Dr. Cheryl's site,

    我們將對 Dr. Cheryl 的網站做一些特定的改變

  • so you can see what I mean.

    而你就可以理解我剛說的是什麼意思

  • So, as you can see, Dr. Cheryl was right.

    你可以看到 Dr. Cheryl 是對的

  • She has a beautiful, clean, modern, uncluttered website, which is great.

    她有很漂亮、乾淨、現代、不凌亂的網站,這很棒

  • And she has a big, bold header when you first land on her site.

    當你初次造訪她的網站,會發現她有一個大且粗體的標題

  • This headline reads: "Dr. Cheryl is the go-to modern day guru of mindful loving."

    這個標題文字寫著:「Dr. Cheryl 是協助維持親密關係的現代領袖。」

  • Now, from a spotlight perspective, here's the problem.

    從鎂光燈的觀點來看,這就是問題所在

  • This headline is about Dr. Cheryl, but it doesn't really contain a benefit or a hook for her visitor,

    這個標題是關於 Dr. Cheryl,但這根本和造訪網站的訪客沾不上邊

  • who's likely on the site because they need some serious relationship help.

    他們可能是真的急需關係協助才來造訪這個網站的

  • I mean, maybe they're on the brink of divorce, maybe they're feeling shameful

    我的意思是,他們可能瀕臨離婚,或許他們正覺得羞愧

  • or broken or embarrassed or at the end of their rope.

    傷心或尷尬難堪,甚至感到無力挽回

  • The point is, if they're coming to this website they're probably saying,

    重點是,如果他們來到這個網站,他們可能是在說:

  • "I need help with my relationship."

    「我需要挽回親密關係。」

  • They're probably not saying, "I need a mindful, loving guru."

    他們可能不是在說:「我需要一個親密關係的領袖。」

  • And I told Dr. Cheryl this: "I don't even know what a mindful loving guru is."

    我還告訴 Dr. Cheryl:「我甚至不知道親密關係領袖是什麼。」

  • I mean, of course I can guess, but the fact that we as a visitor

    我的意思是,我當然可以猜,但事實上我們身為一個訪客

  • have to decode that makes us work just a little bit too hard.

    還必須去解讀那些東西,對我們來說有點太難了

  • And that tells us the copy is about Dr. Cheryl, not about her customer.

    而只告訴了我們這是關於 Dr. Cheryl 的文宣,而不是關於她的顧客

  • So you might be asking, what's the fix?

    所以你可能會問,要怎麼修改呢?

  • Well, using the spotlight method we can write some new headlines that are more customer-focused.

    嗯,使用鎂光燈法,我們可以寫下一些新的標題,使它能更聚焦在顧客身上

  • Now, these aren't perfect, but they get us moving in the right direction.

    這還不夠完美,但它使我們邁向正確的方向

  • First up: "Need relationship help? Let me help you get your love back on track."

    開頭:「需要親密關係的協助嗎?讓我幫你把愛導回正軌吧!」

  • Or we can try this one: "Get the passionate, playful relationship you want. I'll show you how."

    或者我們可以試試看這個:「讓我教你如何抓住想要的激情、富情趣的親密關係!」

  • Or how about this one: "Relationship in trouble? Let's get your love life back on track."

    又或者這個?「親密關係觸礁?讓我們把愛導回正軌!」

  • Instantly we see how these headlines are more customer-focused than Dr. Cheryl-focused.

    我們馬上就看出這些標題變得更聚焦在顧客身上,而非 Dr. Cheryl

  • Right?

    對吧?

  • I mean, if we have relationship trouble and we land on this page,

    我的意思是,如果我們有感情問題,然後我們造訪這個網頁

  • we're much more likely to feel like Dr. Cheryl understands us, she empathizes with where we're at right now,

    代表我們更可能想要 Dr. Cheryl 懂我們,想要她同情我們的處境

  • and she wants to help.

    並且感受到她想提供協助

  • Okay, so let's move on.

    好的,那我們繼續

  • Another place we can make some customer-focused spotlight method improvements is the navigation.

    另一個可以利用聚焦顧客的鎂光燈法來改善的就是「導覽列」

  • So let's look at our current navigation.

    我們來看一下現在的導覽列

  • We see "About Mindful Loving, About Cheryl, What I Have to Share,

    我們看到「關於親密關係」、「關於Cheryl」、「我要分享的東西」、

  • Blog, News and Events, and Connect."

    「部落格」、「最新消息與活動」和「連結」

  • So while "About Mindful Loving" and "About Cheryl" aren't so bad,

    雖然「關於親密關係」和「關於Cheryl」看起來不糟

  • this "What I Have to Share" is really about her.

    但這個「我要分享的東西」就真的只是關於她的事而已

  • So what would happen if we rethought this navigation from our customer's point of view?

    如果我們用顧客的觀點,重新發想瀏覽列,那會發生什麼事呢?

  • If we really shifted that spotlight?

    如果我們真的轉移了聚焦的點?

  • So think about it.

    想想看

  • What is your customer looking for?

    你的顧客在找些什麼?

  • How can we help her find what exactly she wants to find

    我們可以如何幫顧客找到她真正想要找的

  • using words that are simple and clear and customer-focused?

    同時利用簡單明瞭又聚焦其身上的文字呢?

  • I took a stab at a simpler navigation inspired by the spotlight method

    受到鎂光燈法的啟發,我試著想了更簡單的導覽列

  • and here's what I came up with.

    而這就是我想到的

  • Simpler, right?

    簡單吧?

  • So first up, I'm starting with "About," since that's something we all understand and look for.

    所以首先我從「關於」開始,因為那是我們都知道而且想要找的

  • And under "About" if we want we can put a dropdown that talks about "About Dr. Cheryl,"

    在「關於」下方,如果想要的話,我們可以放一個下拉選單,說明「關於Dr. Cheryl」

  • then maybe "About the Methodology,"

    之後或許放「關於方法」

  • and if she has them perhaps testimonials from couples she's helped.

    再來,就是如果有的話,可以放一些 Dr. Cheryl 幫助過的伴侶的感謝話

  • Next I put the word "Services," which is also customer-focused.

    接下來我放了「服務」,這也是聚焦顧客

  • It's something people who want to hire a therapist are probably looking for.

    這就是人們想要雇用治療師時可能會找的東西

  • Again, we can easily add a dropdown for In-Person Therapy or Virtual Therapy

    同樣地,如果 Dr. Cheryl 有提供多種服務的話

  • if she offers multiple services.

    我們可以簡單地加個下拉選單,是給面對面治療或者遠端治療的

  • Next up you'll see I put "Couples Workshops."

    接下來你會看到我放了「伴侶工作坊」

  • Once again, customer-focused language.

    又是一個聚焦於顧客的語言

  • Then I thought about a word like "Resources," which is simple and clear copy

    然後我想到一個字,像是「資源」,這也是簡單明瞭的文案

  • that speaks to what her customer might be looking for.

    表達了 Dr. Cheryl 的顧客可能在找的東西

  • Now, there we also might want to consider a dropdown and list simple subcategories

    現在,我們也可能考慮做一個下拉選單,來列出簡單的次類別

  • like Blog or that's where she can put Upcoming Events, Books, DVDs, or Audio Programs

    像是部落格,或者可以放即將舉辦的活動、書籍、DVD、有聲節目

  • if she has them.

    如果 Dr. Cheryl 有的話

  • And then finally we're ending with "Contact,"

    最後,我們放入「聯繫」在結尾的地方

  • which is much more clear and customer-focused than "Connect."

    這會比「連結」更加簡明,並且聚焦在顧客

  • I want you to remember this: when it comes to effective copywriting, especially for your navigation,

    我要你記得這個:關於廣告文案,尤其是你的導覽列,

  • clear and customer-focused beats clever or cute every day of the week.

    簡單明瞭且聚焦在顧客的文案,往往會贏過聰明或可愛的每日標籤文(Hash Tag)

  • So those are just a few simple shifts inspired by the spotlight method

    以上是一些由鎂光燈法所啟發,並且很簡單的改變方法

  • that can help put more of the focus on Cheryl's customer instead of her.

    它可以更聚焦在顧客身上,而非 Dr. Cheryl 本人

  • Hopefully you can see how this one subtle shift in your focus can help you write better,

    希望你看到這個關於聚焦的微妙轉變是如何幫助你寫出更好的、

  • more customer-centric copythereby allowing you to create a stronger connection with your audience.

    更以顧客為中心的文案,也因此使你打造與聽眾之間更加堅固的連結

  • Now, if you enjoyed this and you want to learn even more ways to improve your copywriting,

    現在如果你喜歡這個,而想學更多關於改善廣告文案的方法

  • go check out TheCopyCure.com.

    去看一下 TheCopyCure.com 網站吧!

  • It is a phenomenal writing course that teaches you how to write copy

    這是個具有影響力的寫作課程,這可以教你如何寫文案

  • that makes your audience feel seen and heard and understood,

    使你的聽眾覺得被看見、被聆聽和被理解

  • which is the most important and overlooked aspect of a meaningful and profitable business.

    這也是一項有意義、有獲利的生意中,最重要也最常被忽略的一環

  • And if you ever forget, remember this Tweetable.

    如果你忘了,記得這是可以推到 Tweeter 上的

  • The secret to a meaningful, profitable business is putting the spotlight on your customers,

    有意義又賺錢的做生意訣竅,就是把鎂光燈投在你的顧客身上

  • not on you.

    而非你本人

  • Now I would love to hear from you.

    現在我很想聽來自你的消息

  • What's one piece of copy on your website that you can use the spotlight method on

    你網站上的哪個部分可以用到鎂光燈法

  • to shift the focus away from you and onto your customers?

    將焦點從你身上轉移到顧客身上呢?

  • Take a stab at changing it and give us the before and after in the comments below.

    嘗試努力改變它,然後在下面留言區給我們看看改變前後的差別

  • Now, as always, the best conversations happen over at MarieForleo.com,

    現在,一如往常,最好的對話交流就在 MarieForleo.com

  • so go there and leave a comment now.

    現在就到那邊留下評論吧!

  • Once you're there, be sure to subscribe to our email list and become an MF Insider.

    一旦到那裏,確認你已經加入我們的 Email 名單,成為 MF 圈內人

  • You'll get instant access to a powerful audio training called How To Get Anything You Want.

    你將立即有權限瀏覽超強的有聲訓練,叫做「How To Get Anything You Want」

  • You'll also get some exclusive content and special giveaways

    你也將取的一些獨家內容,還有特別贈品

  • and personal updates from me that I don't share anywhere else.

    還有我不分享在其他地方的個人的近況

  • Stay on your game and keep going for your dreams

    繼續你的遊戲,繼續追尋你的夢想

  • because the world needs that special gift that only you have.

    因為世界需要只有你有的特別天賦

  • Thank you so much for watching and I'll catch you next time on MarieTV.

    謝謝收看! MarieTV 下次見囉!

  • Ready to find your voice and sell with heart?

    準備找到你的聲音然後誠心地賣出嗎?

  • We'll show you how.

    我們會做給你看

  • Get started now with our free writing class at TheCopyCure.com.

    現在開始試試看我們在 TheCopyCure.com 的免費寫作課

  • Side effects include enlarged profits.

    副作用包含更多的獲利

Peanut butter is one things that gets the mind going in interesting directions.

花生醬是一種會讓人心走向一個奇妙方向的東西

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