Name: 雅思任務2五點得7分（附例子） (IELTS Task 2 Five Points to Score 7 (with example))
Uploaded: 2022-07-03T16:55:35.000Z
Duration: 10 min 35 s

基礎被動語態

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嗨，歡迎來到E幫助Eilts考試準備視頻，這個視頻材料和你即將看到的策略來自三W點E幫助點com，以獲得更多的學術過道幫助，請訪問我們那裡並加入我們本課的全部課程。

I will give you five key points to follow when you're writing your aisles task.

我將給你五個關鍵點，以便你在寫過道任務時遵循。

Make sure to practice these points and get feedback at least several times before you sit the official Eilts exam to give yourself the best chance to get a band of seven or higher on aisles task to.

確保在參加正式的Eilts考試前至少練習這些要點並得到反饋，以使自己有最好的機會在過道任務中獲得7分或更高的分數。

Also I'm going to show you an example essay that includes all of these five important points.

另外，我還會給你看一篇包括這五個重要點的例文。

This means your essay needs at least four paragraphs and introduction.

這意味著你的文章至少需要四個段落和介紹。

Body paragraph one, body paragraph two and a conclusion, remember, your conclusion needs to be more than just a paraphrase or a repeat of the introductory paragraph.

第一主體段、第二主體段和結論，記住，你的結論需要不僅僅是轉述或重複介紹性段落。

Okay, so the second key point that you need to practice and follow, make sure that your essay is a persuasive essay.

好吧，那麼你需要練習和遵循的第二個關鍵點，確保你的文章是一篇說服性的文章。

This means it gives your opinion to the reader.

這意味著它向讀者提供了你的意見。

This is what the essays usually ask for as well.

這也是論文中通常要求的內容。

Your essay needs to be in the first person voice.

你的文章需要用第一人稱的語氣。

This means you need to use I me my at least once in each of the four paragraphs to show that you're giving ideas from your own experiences and from your own past knowledge.

這意味著你需要在四段中的每一段至少使用一次I me my，以表明你從自己的經歷和自己過去的知識中給出想法。

Again, if you look at questions for al's task to you will see that they almost always ask for this kind of opinion.

同樣，如果你看一下阿爾的任務的問題，你會發現他們幾乎總是問這種意見。

Okay now let's jump to key point number three point number three and I'll task two essay that will get a score of at least 65 or seven and more needs to have a direct thesis statement at the end of the introductory paragraph, a thesis statement is a clear sentence which tells the reader what you believe and why you believe that Your thesis statement should include two clear points that are grammatically parallel and will be discussed in the body paragraphs.

好了，現在讓我們跳到關鍵的第三點第三點，我將任務二獲得至少65分或7分以上的論文需要在介紹性段落的末尾有一個直接的論文陳述，論文陳述是一個明確的句子，告訴讀者你相信什麼以及為什麼你相信你的論文陳述應該包括兩個明確的觀點，在文法上是平行的，並將在主體段落討論。

Okay, key point number four your task two essay must flow smoothly.

好了，關鍵點四，你的任務二論文必須流暢。

This means your ideas need to be connected and you must use several complex and compound sentences.

這意味著你的想法需要連接起來，你必須使用幾個複雜的複合句子。

Compound sentences are when you join ideas together in your writing using words like and but or and so on.

複句是指你在寫作中使用諸如 "和"、"但是 "或 "等等 "這樣的詞語將各種觀點連接起來。

Complex sentences are using subordinating conjunctions.

複雜的句子是使用從屬連接詞。

These are words that show opposition, time, condition and cause and effect words like this include since because however on the other hand, nevertheless and so on.

這些是表示反對、時間、條件和因果關係的詞，像這樣的詞包括因為，然而另一方面，儘管如此，等等。

Make sure to use complex compound sentences in order to get high scores.

確保使用複雜的複合句子，以便獲得高分。

Okay, let's jump to point number five Important Point # five your essay must answer the topic and the controlling idea of the question accurately and clearly.

好了，讓我們跳到第五點 重要的第五點，你的文章必須準確清晰地回答問題的主題和控制思想。

Perhaps the most common mistake that test takers make is they do not answer the question accurately or clearly even high level students who have good english and grammar with lots of vocabulary can get low scores if they miss answering the question correctly.

也許考生最常犯的錯誤是他們沒有準確或清楚地回答問題，即使是那些英語和文法好、詞彙量大的高水平學生，如果沒有正確回答問題，也會得到低分。

Before you begin to write your essay, be sure that you have identified the topic of the question and the controlling idea.

在你開始寫文章之前，要確保你已經確定了問題的主題和控制性思想。

Then think about these critically ask what, why how visualize it.

然後批判性地思考這些問題，問是什麼，為什麼，如何把它可視化。

Get a picture in your head and only after you've done this begin to write your essay.

在你的腦海中勾勒出一幅畫面，只有在做完這些之後才開始寫你的文章。

Now that you know the five points which you must follow in order to get seven or more.

現在你知道了你必須遵循的五點，以便獲得七點或更多。

Let's look at a sample task two that includes all of these ideas.

讓我們看看包括所有這些想法的任務二樣本。

Now let's look at the sample isles task to writing question and response.

現在讓我們來看看寫問題和回答的樣本島任務。

Then we will discuss how the five points are applied.

然後我們將討論如何應用這五點。

First the question task two, right about the following topic.

首先是問題任務二，關於以下主題的權利。

Many people choose natural healing methods such as acupuncture and massage therapy to recover from illness.

許多人選擇自然治療方法，如鍼灸和按摩療法來恢復疾病。

Others prefer to use pharmaceutical drugs prescribed by their doctor for their ailments, discuss both views and give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

另一些人則喜歡使用醫生開的藥品來治療疾病，請討論這兩種觀點，併為你的答案提供理由，包括你自己知識或經驗中的任何相關例子。

You should spend no more than 40 minutes on this task.

你花在這項任務上的時間不應超過40分鐘。

Alright, the introductory paragraph, you health has the greatest value for nearly any individual human.

好了，介紹性的段落，你的健康對幾乎所有的人類個體都有最大的價值。

A person must feel strong and healthy in both mind and body in order to feel content and contribute to society.

一個人必須感到身心強大和健康，才能感到滿足併為社會作出貢獻。

Unfortunately sickness from bacteria virus and other terra degen's results in symptoms like headaches, nausea cramps and other negative effects which signal the person to find a cure.

不幸的是，來自細菌病毒和其他地球上的疾病會導致頭痛、噁心、痙攣和其他負面影響的症狀，這預示著人們要找到治療方法。

I believe that both natural and pharmaceutical treatment is effective in helping a patient heal body.

我相信自然和藥物治療都能有效地幫助病人治癒身體。

Natural healing methods are often more gentle in the healing process than chemical based drugs because they are easier to process for the human body.

自然治療方法在治療過程中往往比基於化學的藥物更溫和，因為它們對人體來說更容易處理。

Since natural healing uses herbs, sense or the body itself, the symptoms during recovery are less intense and there are generally no side effects.

由於自然療法使用草藥、感覺或身體本身，恢復期間的症狀不那麼強烈，一般沒有副作用。

For example, I twisted my ankle playing soccer last month and I did not take painkillers.

例如，我上個月踢足球時扭傷了腳踝，我沒有服用止痛藥。

Instead, I used ice and a hot towel to decrease the pain.

相反，我用冰塊和熱毛巾來減少疼痛。

I believe a more natural approach was the right choice for this injury.

我相信更自然的方法是對這種傷害的正確選擇。

However, for other injuries or sickness, medical drugs can be better body.

然而，對於其他傷害或疾病，醫療藥物可以是更好的身體。

Paragraph two pharmaceutical medicines are the right choice when a sickness or injury is sudden and life threatening.

當疾病或傷害突然發生並威脅到生命時，第二段藥品是正確的選擇。

In many cases chemical drugs are more powerful and fast acting than natural healing options.

在許多情況下，化學藥物比自然治療方案更有力，作用更快。

In such cases, the obvious choice is to use pharmacy drugs when available.

在這種情況下，明顯的選擇是在有條件的情況下使用藥房藥物。

A good example is my younger brother Steve.

我的弟弟史蒂夫就是一個很好的例子。

Since steve is highly allergic to bees, he had to use an epinephrine needle to save his life when he was stung on the beach last summer thankfully for modern medicine, my brother can enjoy his life without much sacrifice, concluding paragraph.

由於史蒂夫對蜜蜂高度過敏，去年夏天他在海灘上被蜇傷時，不得不用腎上腺素針頭來挽救他的生命幸好有現代醫學，我的兄弟可以享受他的生活，而沒有太大的犧牲，結尾一段。

In conclusion, both natural and pharmaceutical interventions can benefit people's health.

總之，自然和藥物干預都能使人們的健康受益。

Natural medicines can be more sympathetic to the body during the healing process.

在癒合過程中，天然藥物可以更多地同情身體。

However, medical drugs, fast and intense action can be the only choice.

然而，醫療藥物，快速和強烈的行動可以是唯一的選擇。

It is good that sick or injured people have the option of choosing the right healing approach for them.

患病或受傷的人可以選擇適合自己的治療方法，這是好事。

Now that we have seen the question and the response for this task to let's look at a little bit more detailed information on how the five points are applied to this example.

現在我們已經看到了這個任務的問題和回答，讓我們來看看更詳細的資訊，看看這五點是如何應用於這個例子的。

Okay, now that we have seen this example, task to question and response, let's look at it a little bit more carefully and in detail to see how the five important points to get a score of seven or higher are applied to see the rest of this lesson and for lots more help with the academic aisles to get materials, strategies and assistance to get a high score.

好了，現在我們已經看到了這個例子，任務到問題和回答，讓我們再仔細地看一下，詳細地看看如何應用這五個重要的點來獲得7分或更高的分數，看看本課的其餘部分，以及在學術過道上獲得材料、策略和幫助以獲得高分的很多幫助。

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下次你參加考試時，請訪問我們的網站triple w dot a help dot com並加入我們的完整課程。