means getting the dreaded personal statement in order.

意味著要把可怕的個人陳述整理好。

I'll show you how to make your personal statement stand out.

我將告訴你如何讓你的個人陳述脫穎而出。

What's going on guys, Dr. Jubbal, MedSchoolInsiders.com.

這是怎麼回事夥計們，朱波醫生，醫學流派內幕網。

Arguably the most daunting and challenging part of the application process is writing

可以說，申請過程中最令人生畏、最具挑戰性的部分就是撰寫

your personal statement.

你的個人陳述。

While your GPA and test scores are already set in stone and are very objective measurements

雖然你的GPA和考試成績已經是一成不變的，是非常客觀的衡量標準

of academic performance, the personal statement is a creative expression of you as a person.

的學術表現，個人陳述是你作為一個人的創造性表達。

The personal statement can make or break your Application.

個人陳述可以使你的申請成功或失敗。

A great one can open the door to an interview for a mediocre applicant and a bad one can

一個好的可以為一個平庸的申請者打開面試的大門，一個不好的可以

rule out even an applicant with top scores.

即使是分數最高的申請人，也要排除在外。

And unlike your grades or MCAT or Step 1, you have complete control over your personal

與你的成績、MCAT或Step 1不同的是，你可以完全控制你的個人。

statement at this point.

在這一點上，聲明。

In this video, we'll go over tips to make your personal statement stand out.

在這個視頻中，我們將介紹讓你的個人陳述脫穎而出的技巧。

If you haven't already, be sure to check out our personal statement blog posts on the Med

如果您還沒有查看我們的個人陳述博客文章，請一定要在Med

School Insiders website.

校內人士網站。

Link is in the description below.

鏈接在下面的描述中。

They have some additional information that is not included in this video.

他們有一些額外的資訊，不包括在這個視頻中。

First, answer the prompt.

首先，回答提示。

Before putting ink to paper, it's important that you consider the reason you are writing

在落筆之前，重要的是你要考慮你寫作的原因

the personal statement.

個人陳述。

The questions you should be answering are going to be some variation of the following:

你應該回答的問題會是以下的一些變化。

for medical school applicants; Why do you want to go to medical school and become a

對於醫學院的申請者來說；你為什麼要去醫學院，成為一名。

doctor and what makes you a good fit to be a doctor?

醫生，你適合做醫生的原因是什麼？

For residency applicant: Why do you want to go into this specialty and what makes you

對於住院醫師申請者。你為什麼想進入這個專業，是什麼讓你... ...

a good fit?

合適嗎？

Everyone has their own unique and personal reasons.

每個人都有自己獨特的個人原因。

Figure out what yours are and be sure that your essay is focused around supporting these

弄清楚你的是什麼，並確保你的文章重點圍繞支持這些

reasons.

原因：

Number 2, read examples.

第2，讀例子。

The hardest part in writing your personal statement is just starting.

寫個人陳述最難的部分是剛剛開始。

It's important to just write something, anything and not judge yourself in the process.

重要的是，只要寫點東西，什麼都可以，不要在這個過程中對自己進行評價。

You can always go back and make edits.

你可以隨時回去進行編輯。

Getting ideas down on paper is the most challenging part, but it is also the most crucial part.

把想法寫在紙上是最具挑戰性的部分，但也是最關鍵的部分。

Everything else will just open up from there.

其他的一切都會從那裡打開。

That being said, I also found it incredibly helpful to find example personal statements.

說到這裡，我還發現找到個人陳述的例子非常有用。

Look at the good, the bad and the ugly and curiously examine what makes an essay good

看好、看壞、看醜，好奇地審視什麼才是好作文

or bad.

或壞。

What aspects did you like?

你喜歡哪些方面？

What aspects did you not like?

你不喜歡哪些方面？

I've placed a link in the description below to some books with personal statement examples.

我在下面的描述中放了一些個人陳述範例的書的鏈接。

This is a great place to start.

這是一個很好的開始。

Number three, Organization is key.

第三，組織是關鍵。

This may seem obvious but it is often overlooked.

這一點看似顯而易見，但往往被人忽視。

Treat your personal statement like any other English essay you have written.

對待你的個人陳述，就像對待你所寫的任何其他英文論文一樣。

In other words, frame It around a thesis, with body paragraphs corresponding to support

換句話說，圍繞著一個論題來構架，正文段落對應支持

the thesis and then closing with a conclusion to bring it all together.

的論文，然後以結論結尾，把所有的內容整合在一起。

Without proper organization, Personal statements come off as loosely thrown together and readers

如果沒有適當的組織，個人陳述就會顯得鬆散，而讀者也會認為是在浪費時間。

quickly lose interest.

很快就會失去興趣。

Number four, show, don't tell.

第四條，展示，不說。

Admissions committee members are reading thousands of personal statements.

招生委員會成員要閱讀成千上萬的個人陳述。

You want to tell an engaging and captivating story.

你要講一個引人入勝的故事。

One way you definitely won't is if you tell the reader how motivated driven and passionate

你肯定不會的一個方法是，如果你告訴讀者你有多大的動力和激情。

you are about medicine.

你是關於醫學的。

Instead, tell a story or an anecdote and use that to demonstrate desirable qualities you

相反，講一個故事或軼事，用它來展示你的理想品質。

wish to portray.

希望描繪的。

I have a friend who wrote a killer personal statement that centered around her practice

我有一個朋友，她寫了一份殺手級的個人陳述，圍繞她的做法

of the violin and how that made her an excellent applicant.

的小提琴，以及如何使她成為一個優秀的申請人。

It was memorable, unique and told a story of how violent would make her a great fit.

它令人難忘，獨特，講述了一個暴力會讓她很適合的故事。

She did not just list qualities.

她不只是列舉品質。

Number five, simple is sometimes better.

第五條，簡單有時更好。

Don't feel like you have to write the best personal statement the world has ever seen.

不要覺得你必須寫出世界上最好的個人陳述。

Students sometimes get too creative and end up with a personal statement that does more

學生有時太有創意了，最後的個人陳述做的比較多

harm than good.

弊大於利

Your main focus should be presenting a coherent piece on why you want to go to medical school

你的主要關注點應該是提出一篇連貫的文章，說明你為什麼想去醫學院。

and why you will be a good physician.

以及為什麼你會成為一個好醫生。

Focusing on complex sentence structure and extravagant word choice will only take away

注重複雜的句子結構和奢侈的選詞，只會讓人失去

from convincing your reader.

從說服讀者。

Admissions committee members can easily spot when you're using a thesaurus and it doesn't

招生委員會成員很容易發現，當你使用詞庫時，它不

reflect well on you.

反映出你的好。

Number six, get eyes on your paper.

第六，讓眼睛盯著你的報紙。

Reviewing is arguably the most important part of the process.

複習可以說是最重要的環節。

Everyone knows that they should have a few people read their personal statement for feedback.

每個人都知道，他們應該讓幾個人閱讀他們的個人陳述以獲得反饋。

While sharing it with your friends and family is definitely useful, after writing both my

雖然分享給你的朋友和家人肯定是有用的，但在寫完我的兩個

medical school and residency personal statements, I have learned that friends are inherently

在醫學院和住院醫師個人陳述中，我瞭解到，朋友們天生是

biased.

有偏見的。

They usually want to be nice and supportive and they can give good general feedback and

他們通常希望得到好的支持，他們可以給予良好的一般反饋和

grammatical fixes but they aren't the ones that are going to tear up your essay, be honest,

文法上的修正，但它們並不是要撕毀你的文章的，要誠實。

have the experience and tell you what you don't want to hear.

有經驗，告訴你你不想聽的東西。

And some times we need that.

有些時候，我們需要這樣。

While friends and family are helpful, there are two important groups that you should get

雖然朋友和家人是有幫助的，但有兩個重要的群體，你應該獲得

your personal statement reviewed by.

您的個人陳述由以下人員審查：

The first is a mentor of some sort.

第一個是某種程度上的導師。

Ideally you want to find someone who has served on the admissions committee in the past.

理想情況下，你要找一個過去曾在招生委員會任職的人。

They understand what makes a good or bad personal statement from experience.

他們從經驗中明白什麼是好的或壞的個人陳述。

They know you on a professional level but they aren't as invested as friends.

他們在專業層面上了解你，但他們不像朋友那樣投入。

I was lucky to find a faculty member who read through hundreds of personal statements every

我很幸運地找到了一位教員，他每天都會讀完幾百份個人陳述。

single year.

單年。

He was also known for being somewhat of a scary person, but that's a good thing.

他也是出了名的有些嚇人，不過這也是好事。

Many people told me that my essay was good, but he was brutally honest and told me to

很多人告訴我，我的作文很好，但他很殘酷地告訴我，我的作文很好。

rewrite the whole thing.

重寫整個事情。

This was just days before it was due, and I'm glad he did because after rewriting it,

這是在到期前幾天，我很高興他這樣做，因為重寫後。

the essay was much much stronger.

作文強多了。

It's important not to take harsh feedback or criticism personally as this usually is

重要的是，不要把苛刻的反饋或責備當作個人，因為這通常是

the most useful feedback you will receive.

您將收到最有用的反饋。

The second group would be a professional essay editing service.

第二類就是專業的論文編輯服務了。

Again, I made the investment and my essay came out much stronger in the end.

同樣，我做了投資，最後我的作文也強多了。

The Med School Insiders team has been growing over the past several months and we have been

在過去的幾個月裡，醫派內參團隊一直在成長，我們一直在

hard at work.

辛苦的工作。

We now offer a premium essay editing service and the quality is second to none.

我們現在提供優質的論文編輯服務，品質是首屈一指的。

How can I say that?

我怎麼能這樣說呢？

We devised a rigorous screening and application process for each doctor on our team and we

我們為團隊中的每一位醫生設計了嚴格的篩選和申請流程，我們

use a proprietary and systematic method to ensure the best quality work.

使用專有和系統的方法，以確保最好的工作品質。

We're committed to excellence and it shows.

我們致力於追求卓越，這一點顯而易見。

Anything less would be against the mission of this channel and our reputation would suffer.

如果不這樣做，就違背了這個頻道的使命，我們的聲譽也會受到影響。

Take a look for yourself, link is in the description below.

自己看看吧，鏈接在下面的描述中。

Our team consists entirely of top doctors with real admission committee experience.

我們的團隊完全由具有實際招生委員會經驗的頂級醫生組成。

Who better than real doctors who have experience with real applicants?

誰能比真正有經驗的醫生與真正的申請人更好？

And with our rigorous screening process, we found those that are the best at what they

通過我們嚴格的篩選過程，我們發現了那些最擅長的領域

do.

做。

Use the coupon code "Youtube25 for $25 off of your comprehensive personal statement editing

使用優惠券代碼 "Youtube25"，您的綜合個人陳述編輯服務可享受25美元的優惠。

purchase.

購買。

I recommend the 3 edit option to get the best bang for your buck.

我推薦3個編輯選項，以獲得最好的收益。

This is also what I did when I purchased essay editing services for my own personal Statement.

這也是我為自己的個人Statement購買論文編輯服務時的做法。

The first edit usually includes larger changes that take your essay from decent to good,

第一次編輯通常包括較大的改動，使你的文章從體面到良好。

but the second and third edits are what take it to the next level and polish it into a

但第二和第三編輯是什麼把它帶到一個新的水準，並把它打磨成一個。

final product.

最終產品。

The team and I are tremendously proud of the final product we're able to offer you.

我們的團隊和我都為我們能夠為您提供的最終產品感到非常自豪。

Again, visit the link in the description below and use the coupon code Youtube25 for $25

同樣，請訪問下面描述中的鏈接，並使用優惠券代碼Youtube25購買25美元。

off your purchase.

折扣您的購買。

You'll be glad you did!

你會很高興你做了!

That is it for this video.

這個視頻就到此為止。

Thank you all so much for watching.

非常感謝大家的觀看。

If you liked the video, make sure you press that like button.

如果你喜歡這段視頻，一定要按下那個喜歡的按鈕。

Hit subscribe if you have not already and I will see you guys in that next one.

點擊訂閱，如果你還沒有，我會看到你們在下一個。