at how to describe you IELTS Academic Task 1 Pie Chart. This is the quick version because

在如何描述你雅思學術任務1餅圖。這是快速版，因為

there is another video which goes into much more detail. It�s about 15 minutes long.

有另一個視頻可以瞭解更多的細節。它大約有15分鐘長。

Okay? So, this is the summary, the overview. Let�s get going. First of all, you need

好嗎？所以，這就是總結，概述。讓我們開始吧。首先，你需要

to know what type of language you�re going to use and this means, getting familiar with

要知道你要使用什麼類型的語言，這就意味著，要熟悉你要使用的語言。

the fractions. Okay? You need to know that 50% is half. Okay? So, you can say half of

分數。好嗎？你要知道，50%是一半。好嗎？ 所以，你可以說50%是一半。所以，你可以說一半的

the exports come from Canada or a quarter of the exports come from China. Quarter�s

在加拿大，有四分之一的出口來自加拿大，或者四分之一的出口來自中國。四分之一。

obviously 25%. If you want to go even further, you can make

顯然25%。如果你想更進一步，你可以使

sure that you are familiar with like a more advanced structures like slightly under a

確保你熟悉像一個更先進的結構，如稍微下一個

quarter of the exports came from China. Now, slightly is a more elaborate eloquent way

四分之一的出口來自中國。現在，稍稍是一個更詳細的雄辯的方式。

of saying let's say, instead of saying, "24%", "slightly under a quarter".

的說讓&#39；說，而不是說，&quot；24%&quot；，&quot；略低於四分之一&quot；。

Or if it's "51%" we can say �just over half of the exports came from Russia

如果是51%，我們可以說一半以上的出口來自俄羅斯。

or wherever it is. So, varying the language we use and using

或任何地方。所以，改變我們使用的語言，使用

slightly more sophisticated structures will help us a lot in getting or picking up some

稍微複雜一點的結構會對我們獲得或拾取一些東西有很大的幫助。

of the good points, okay, some of the high points.

的優點，好吧，一些高點。

Next one: we also need to implement the superlatives. In this case, what we're going to do is

下一個：我們還需要實現超綱。在這種情況下，我們要做的是

we're definitely going to mention the largest portion and the smallest portion, without

我們'一定會提到最大的部分和最小的部分，而沒有

fail because by the very nature, the kind of exceptions, alright?

失敗，因為從本質上來說，那種例外，好嗎？

So, we're going to mention the biggest, so in this case, we�ll say the largest portion

所以，我們'要提到最大的，所以在這種情況下，我們會說最大的部分。

of export came from Yorkshire, for example or whatever.

比如說，出口量來自約克郡或其他地方。

Just a side note here, to improve the vocabulary even more, we will use words like the largest

這裡只是順便說一下，為了進一步提高詞彙量，我們會用一些詞彙，比如最大的

or the most prominent. Try to avoid using words like good, bad, big, small as these

或最突出的。儘量避免使用好、壞、大、小等詞語，因為這些

are kind of like basic vocabulary. Now, we'll go into the language. The next

是一種像基本詞彙。現在，我們'將進入語言。接下來

thing while we're talking about selecting and choosing, reporting on the portions is

的事情，而我們在談論選擇和選擇，報告的部分是

if we find three portions that are roughly the same, three portions that are say 10%,

如果我們找到三份大致相同的部分，三份是說10%。

12% and 15%, for example. What we can do is group them together and then we can use the

比如說12%和15%。我們可以做的是將它們歸為一組，然後我們可以使用的。

famous sentence, respectively. For example: Yorkshire, Derbyshire and Lancashire

名句，分別。比如說約克郡、德比郡和蘭開夏郡。

had 10%, 12%, and 15% respectively, of total exports. So, getting to groups with that sentence

分別佔出口總額的10%、12%和15%。所以，用這句話進入群體

is very useful, as well. Now, so that's the language and the choosing

是非常有用的，以及。現在，所以這'的語言和選擇

of information. How are we going to structure the actual report? First of all, like I�ve

的資訊。我們將如何組織實際的報告呢？首先，就像我之前說的那樣。

said even in the other videos, what we want to do is quickly describe what the graph is

說，即使在其他的視頻中，我們要做的是快速描述圖是什麼。

showing, not the story. So, to describe what the graph is showing, we're just going to

顯示，而不是故事。所以，為了描述圖表所顯示的內容，我們'我們只是要'。

reinterpret the title, paraphrase it and then just write it. We're not going to mention

重新解讀標題，解讀後再寫就可以了。我們'不打算提

anything about the largest, the smallest, the fastest growing or whatever. We�re just

我們只是在做一些關於最大的，最小的，發展最快的或者其他的事情。我們只是

going to restate title, that's it. We're not going to implement the story,

要重述標題，那'就是這樣。我們'不打算實施這個故事。

we're not going to talk about the story because we'll save that for the summary.

我們'不打算談論這個故事，因為我們'將保存為總結。

It's not a conclusion, by the way. So, we've got our introduction then the body paragraph.

對了，這不是結論。所以，我們已經有了我們的介紹，然後正文段。

It might be one, it might be two, depending. If you've got a pie chart and a line graph,

可能是一個，也可能是兩個，視情況而定。如果你有一張餅圖和一張線圖。

then you'll probably want to use two paragraphs. If you've got maybe three pie charts, one

那麼你'可能要用兩段。如果你也許有三個餅圖，一

bulk body paragraph and then your summary. To become a professional comes just through

大量的正文段，然後是你的總結。要成為一個專業的人，只是通過

practice. It's not an easy task. It's selecting information. So we've got our introduction,

練習。這'不是一件容易的事。它'是選擇資訊。所以我們'已經有了介紹。

body paragraph, and then we�re going to finish with our summary sentence. Now, what's

然後，我們將以我們的總結句來結束。現在，什麼？

really important as well, is that we plan the essay before we actually start. So we're

真正重要的是，我們計劃的論文 之前，我們實際上開始。所以，我們'。

going to choose what information we�re going to implement or what we�re going to report

我們將選擇我們要實施的資訊或我們要報告的資訊。

about in our body paragraph because it has already more or less got two sentences completely

因為它已經或多或少的有兩句完整的話了。

under control with the introduction and the summary. Basically, it�s about eight, ten

在這一過程中，我們可以通過介紹和總結來控制。基本上，它是8個，10個。

sentences left. Choose that information before you start writing

剩下的句子。在你開始寫作之前，請選擇這些資訊

and then transfer from your notes into your writing using superlative and all those language

然後從你的筆記中轉移到你的寫作中，使用超綱和所有這些語言。

points we talked about before. Then as a final bonus tip. Once you've done all this and

我們之前說過的幾點。然後作為最後的獎勵提示。一旦你'已經做了這一切，並

hopefully you can do this between 15, 18 minutes, leave about 2 minutes to go through all the

希望你能在15、18分鐘內完成，留下2分鐘左右的時間來完成所有的工作。

words, all the sentences and look for mistakes. But don't just look for mistakes in a general

詞，所有的句子，並尋找錯誤。但不要只看一般的錯誤。

fashion. Look for mistakes that you�ve made previously on a writing task that you've

時尚。你可以看看你之前在寫作任務中犯過的錯誤，你'。

written before. So, what you should have done is get some

以前寫過。所以，你應該做的是得到一些。

feedback on your writing. You can send it to me. Final and see check. You can send it

反饋你的寫作。你可以發給我。最後看看檢查。你可以把它

to me and I'll say, �Look, Maria or whoever. You've got this, this, and this wrong. Singular/plural

我就會說："聽著，Maria或者其他什麼人，你把這個，這個，還有這個都弄錯了"。你把這個，這個，還有這個都弄錯了。單數/複數

is a serious problem for you and I don�t know. Sex and genitive, as well.�

是一個嚴重的問題，你我都不知道。性和屬相，也是如此。

What you really should do the next part is -- sorry for the next essay she writes, is

你真正應該做的下一部分是--對不起，她寫的下一篇文章，是

in those two minutes afterwards, look for the mistakes that she�s made in essays previously

在這之後的兩分鐘裡，尋找她之前在作文中所犯的錯誤。

that she sent to me. If I were Maria, I'd be like, "Okay I've got to look for singular/plural,

她發給我的。如果我是瑪麗亞，我'會像，"好吧，我'得尋找單數/複數。

third person singular, sex and genitive and this way you can at least pick up 5%, 10%

第三人稱單數、性別和屬相，這樣至少可以撿到5%、10%的東西

extra points. Go through, correct your own mistakes, so

加分。通過，糾正自己的錯誤，所以

the examiner doesn't have to, happy days. You're going score high. Alright? Okay then.

考官不必，快樂的日子。你會得高分的好嗎？好吧，那麼。

So hopefully that will help you. If you want more tips like that, the more advice, the

所以希望能幫到你。如果你想得到更多這樣的技巧，更多的建議，就會有更多的收穫。

more support, more feedback and you�re desperate to improve, come to the website. Sign up and

更多的支持，更多的反饋，而你又急於改進，就來網站吧。註冊並

let�s get cracking. Okay? All the best!

讓我們開始吧好嗎？好嗎？