remember paraphrasing just means putting other people's words into your own words

記住，轉述只是意味著把別人的話變成自己的話

communicating something that you read or heard and putting into your own words

現身說法

which shows understanding and also shows good academic honesty

體現了理解力，也體現了良好的學術誠信。

ok so before I give you some specific examples i just want to go through some

好吧，在我給你一些具體的例子之前，我只是想通過一些具體的例子。

very quick steps with you that are quite helpful

非常快速的步驟與你，是相當有用的

okay step one is read carefully and this is an important step because we cannot

好吧，第一步是仔細閱讀，這是一個重要的步驟，因為我們不能。

paraphrase what we don't understand

轉述不懂的地方。

so we need to read carefully and we need to make sure we understand step 2

所以我們需要仔細閱讀，我們需要確保我們理解步驟2。

so read carefully and make sure you understand because that's where the

所以仔細閱讀，並確保你明白，因為這'的地方。

ability to paraphrase comes from: it comes from our understanding

轉述能力來自：來自我們的理解

step 3 once you've read and understand

第3步，一旦你閱讀並理解了

go away and take a break... let the information process...Let it become part

走開，休息一下......讓資訊的過程......讓它成為一部分。

of your brain

腦子裡

this is the way I think of it: it becomes part of your knowledge base. it becomes

我是這樣想的：它變成了你知識庫的一部分。

part of you, and then once it becomes part of you,

的一部分，然後一旦它成為你的一部分。

once you understand it, now you can put it into your own words

一語中的

step 4, when you return from your nice break

第四步，當你從美好的假期歸來時

rewrite it in your own words -- and here's the key: without

用你自己的話重寫它-------------------------------------------------------關鍵是：不

looking

樣子

don't have that text in front of you write it in your way from your memory

不在你面前的文字，你用你的方式從你的記憶中寫出來。

and this can be effective

而這可以有效

Ok, now make sure to change grammar and vocabulary as necessary. And then once

好了，現在一定要根據需要修改文法和詞彙。 然後一旦

you think you have rephrased, check to see the

你認為你已經重新措辭了，請檢查查看

differences. Compare the original with what you wrote

差異。 將原文與你寫的內容進行對比

look at the difference in grammar and look at the difference in words

看文法的區別，看單詞的區別。

words and grammar

詞法

here's an interesting website it's called handyman online.com /paraphrasing- tool . HTML

這裡有一個有趣的網站，叫handyman online.com /paraphrasing-工具。HTML

i recommend you google this

我建議你谷歌這個

just google handyman online com

只是谷歌雜工在線com

google paraphrasing and I'm sure the website will come up

谷歌解讀和我'm肯定網站會來的。

it's a great way to compare your original text with the one that you

它'是一個偉大的方式來比較你的原始文本與你的一個。

wrote. for example it looks like this. you put the original text here

例如，它看起來像這樣，你把原文放在這裡。

you know I like sports and then here you might say something like-- okay I enjoy

你知道我喜歡運動，然後在這裡，你可能會說一些像 - 好吧，我喜歡

athletics and you get to check to see the differences. i won't go over all the

運動員和你得到檢查，以看到的差異。

details now but you put the original phrase or sentence or paragraph

但你把原來的短語或句子或段子

there in here

在此

you put your version and you you look on the bottom to see some of the

你把你的版本和你你看的底部，看到一些。

differences

差異

ok

好的

so step six is site

所以第六步是網站

the power praise text you still give the author credit and you cite it you don't

權力讚美的文字，你仍然給作者信用和你引用它你不';。

quote it but you just give it a citation

引而不發

it says that you got the information somewhere else ok

它說你在別的地方得到了資訊 好吧。

and this is important when it's new information if it is common knowledge

這是很重要的，當它'新的資訊，如果它是眾所周知的。

then you don't need to cite for example you know breakfast is important

然後你不'需要引用例如你知道早餐是重要的。

this is common knowledge everybody knows it there's no reason to

這是常識，每個人都知道它有&#39；沒有理由去

- cite that it's not an original idea for it

- 引用它'的不是一個原創的想法，為它

maybe it was at one point but it certainly is not in new information

也許它是在一個點上，但它肯定不是在新的資訊。

these days

這年頭

so there's no reason to cite ok now i'm going to go over an example sentence

所以沒有理由去引用，現在我要去看一個例句。

level changes here as a sentence

句式變化

new york city in engaging city with a vibrant ambiance and exhilarating pace

紐約市是一個充滿活力的城市，擁有令人振奮的氛圍和節奏。

is one of the foremost tourist destinations in the world

是世界上最重要的旅遊目的地之一。

now i need i find that to be interesting information and i'm going to paraphrase

現在，我需要我發現這是有趣的資訊，我'我要轉述。

it again I'm going to look at vocabulary and grammar

再來看看詞彙和文法吧。

so here's my paraphrase version i wrote one of the most popular places in the

所以這裡'是我的解說版本，我寫了一個最流行的地方在美國的

world to visit is New York

訪世界是紐約

so this kind of takes the place of this new york is very popular for most

所以，這種地方的這種紐約是非常受歡迎的大多數。

tourist destination means that it is one of the most popular places in the world

旅遊目的地意味著它是世界上最受歡迎的地方之一。

to visit see it's a tourist destination

訪問看到它'是一個旅遊目的地。

so it's a popular place to visit to visit is taking the place of tourist

所以它是一個受歡迎的地方，參觀訪問是取代旅遊的地方。

destination

目的地

people love to visit because it's an exciting and

人們喜歡訪問，因為它是一個令人興奮的和

interesting

有趣的

so that takes the place of this part here where they're saying that it's

所以，這需要這個地方的一部分在這裡，他們說，它'的。

exhilarating and engaging

妙趣橫生

well, engaging basically means interesting and exhilarating

好吧，引人入勝基本上意味著有趣和令人振奮的。

basically means exciting

基本上就是刺激

so again simply changing words in changing grammatical structure and in

所以，在改變語法結構的時候，又只是簡單地換了個詞，而在

the end what you have is a paraphrase

矯枉過正

now let's take a look at a paragraph level

現在，讓我們來看看一個段落的水準。

it's a bit different at paragraph level. It requires a little bit more work

它'在段落層面有點不同。它需要多一點的工作

so here's the paragraph: BPA a toxin resin found in most plastics can be

所以這裡'的段落。 雙酚A是一種在大多數塑膠中發現的有毒樹脂，可以是

detrimental to your health

有損健康

the International Health Organization has done many studies that support this

國際衛生組織做了許多研究，支持這一觀點。

hypothesis

假說

many scientists believe that the molecules--

許多科學家認為，這些分子--

although in small amounts-- enter the body slowly over time after years of

雖然數量不多，但經過多年的使用，會慢慢進入人體。

consuming foods and drinks packaging plastic the amount of BPA can be

食用食品和飲料包裝塑膠的雙酚A含量可達標。

dangerous

危險的

now this can be tough but we need to do is notice which words

現在，這可能是艱難的，但我們需要做的是注意到哪些單詞。

can we not live without -- in other words which words must stay

我們不能沒有 -- -- 換句話說，哪些詞必須保留？

we cannot change these works and i chose these words as unable to change. can't

我們不能改變這些作品，我選擇這些詞是無法改變。 不能&#39；t

change BPA because that's so specific

改變雙酚A，因為那是如此的具體。

You must have that in order to make set to communicate the author's

你必須有，以使設置傳達作者'的。

ideas, so BPA international Health Organization you can't there's no other

思想，所以雙酚A國際衛生組織你不能't沒有'的其他。

words for that in my view. I think molecules need not be changed because

的話，在我看來。 我認為分子不需要改變，因為

it's so specific and it's such a scientific and specialist word and again

它是如此的具體，它是如此的科學和專業的詞，並再次。

BPA can't be changed but words like detrimental can. Let's right-click

BPA無法改變，但有害等字眼可以。 讓我們點擊右鍵

detrimental we see the synonyms are negative damaging harmful.

detrimental我們看到同義詞是消極的damaging有害的。

so these can be easily done in fact if you want you just say he just ok

所以這些都可以很容易做到其實如果你想你就說他就好了。

detrimental synonym and i'm going to say damaging

損害的同義詞和我'要說破壞性的

so there you go damaging international Health Organization of studies now i

所以你去破壞國際衛生組織的研究，現在我。

right clicked on studies but none of these words will be appropriate because

右鍵點擊學習，但這些詞都不合適，因為。

here

此處

the computer thinks it's about lessons and training and education -- but it's not. But,

計算機認為它是關於課程、培訓和教育的 -- 但它不是。 但是。

I do know a word and it could be

我知道一個詞，可能是

experiments...... or you may think that this word is not replaceable. You see, some words

實驗......或者你會覺得這個詞是不能代替的。 你看，有些詞

may not be replaceable and there is some judgment that you can use

可能無法更換，有一些判斷力，你可以用

but what matters most is the paragraph feels and reads differently than the

但最重要的是，這段話的感覺和讀法，與以往的

original

原有

so words like enter mean 'go into' a 'body' not really sure.....

所以像enter這樣的詞是指'進入'一個'身體'，不是很確定......。

let's take a look synonyms physique, build, bulk ,organization, group, figure

Let's take a look 同義詞 physique, build, bulk ,organization, group, figure

form

形成

none of these-- even though they're synonyms-- would actually fit this sentence

沒有這些 -- 即使他們'同義詞 -- 將實際上適合這個句子。

so like I said in class we have to be very careful about just using synonyms

所以就像我在課堂上說的，我們必須非常小心 只是使用同義詞。

because we have to use the right synonym and in terms of this paragraph body is

因為我們必須使用正確的同義詞，就本段正文而言，是

probably necessary

可能需要

you probably need it consuming foods all that

你可能需要它消耗的食物，所有

that was easy consuming foods means eating foods

食之無味，食之有味

ok - to consume means to eat so we can change that

好吧，消費的意思是吃，所以我們可以改變這一點。

so as you can see there's some words we can change and some we can't ....dangerous

所以你可以看到，有些話我們可以改，有些話我們不能改......危險。

we can look at synonyms of dangerous look at that hazardous, treacherous

我們可以看看危險的同義詞看看，危險的，險惡的。

perilous, precarious the one that I think is the best is a unsafe or hazardous you

岌岌可危 我認為最好的是不安全或危險的你。

know things can be hazardous or detrimental or hazardous ok so or

知道事情會有危險或有害或危險 好的或

negative for your health there's lots of ways to do it

負你的健康有很多的方法來做到這一點。

the point is that you identify those words that really can't be changed and

重點是，你要確定那些真正不能改變的詞語，並。

then identify those words that can and you're halfway home

然後找出那些可以和你半斤八兩的詞，你就可以回家了

the next part is changing the grammar so let's take a look at the paragraph that

下一部分是改變文法，所以讓我們來看看這段話

i paraphrased ok here's my version

我解讀好了這裡'是我的版本。

I said BPA is a dangerous chemical and according to studies by the

我說過雙酚A是一種危險的化學物質，根據研究由

International Health Organization it can have negative impacts on our health

國際衛生組織它可以對我們的健康產生不利的影響

the scientific community has done many experiments and believe that the plastic

科學界做了很多實驗，認為塑

molecules from the food wrappings make it into our body slowly

食物包裝中的分子會慢慢進入我們的身體裡

so enter becomes 'make it into'

所以進入就變成了'使其進入&39。

over time the amount of plastics increases which can be dangerous to our

隨著時間的推移，塑膠的數量不斷增加，這可能會對我們的健康造成危害。

bodies

機構

now i'm going to bring up the old paragraph or the original paragraph and

現在，我'我要把老段或原段和

let's see if we can look at some differences here

讓我們來看看我們是否可以在這裡看一些差異。

BPA is a dangerous chemical and according to the International Health

雙酚A是一種危險的化學品，根據國際衛生局的規定，雙酚A是一種危險的化學品。

Organization can have negative impacts on health

組織會對健康產生負面影響

ok so here it says BPA, a toxin resin found the most plastics, can be

好吧，所以這裡說雙酚A，一種有毒的樹脂，發現大多數塑膠，可以是。

detrimental to your health

有損健康

so detrimental year to your health changes to negative impacts

如此不利於你的健康的一年變化到負面影響。

ok many scientists believe that the molecules --although in small amounts-- enter

好吧，許多科學家認為，分子 - -儘管數量很少 - -進入

the body slowly over time. Hhere I said the scientific community has done many

隨著時間的推移，身體慢慢。 我在這裡說科學界已經做了很多的工作

experiments and believe that the plastic molecules from the food wrappings make it

實驗，並認為食品包裝上的塑膠分子使其。

into our body slowly. Over time, the amount of plastic increases which can be

緩慢地進入我們的身體。 隨著時間的推移，塑膠的數量增加，這可能是

dangerous to our bodies

危害身體

so what you have here is a change of grammar and a change of vocabulary and

所以，你有什麼在這裡是一個文法的變化 和詞彙的變化，並。

of course notice that some words can't be changedwhile some can

當然注意到有些字不能改，而有些字可以改

okay well that's it

好吧，好吧，這是它

this is a good start paraphrasing look at vocabulary

這是一個很好的開始轉述看詞彙量

look at grammar know what you can change know what you can't change and over time

看文法知道你能改變什麼知道你不能改變什麼，隨著時間的推移。

this will become natural it will become easy for you

水到渠成

ok thank you and if you have any questions please remember to ask mr. guy

好的，謝謝你，如果你有任何問題，請記得問先生。

and happy happy paraphrasing

和幸福快樂的轉述