Name: 雅思 - 任務2寫作 - 如何取得9分的成績 (IELTS - Task 2 Writing – How to Score Band 9)
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Now let's learn how to write a band nine Introduction for task two of the writing section.

現在讓我們來學習如何為寫作部分的任務二寫一個九段式的介紹。

For the first step we need to read the question carefully.

對於第一步，我們需要仔細閱讀問題。

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

你應該花大約40分鐘來完成這項任務。

Some people believe that standardized english exams, like I.

有些人認為，標準化的英語考試，如我。

However, think that standard english exams are important for society, which do you believe and why Give explanations and examples to support your opinion.

然而，認為標準英語考試對社會很重要，你相信哪一種，為什麼 給出解釋和例子來支持你的觀點。

We're ready to do some planning in order to get a high band score 78 or nine on the writing section.

我們準備做一些計劃，以便在寫作部分獲得78或9分的高分段。

You have to plan your response carefully.

Even a fluent writer of english will have difficulty to get a great mark without first doing some planning step number one, paraphrase the question, paraphrasing the question means to rewrite the question in your own words.

即使是一個流利的英語作家，如果不先做一些計劃，也很難得到一個很好的分數，第一步，轉述問題，轉述問題意味著用你自己的話改寫問題。

This will help you generate vocabulary for the essay.

It ensures that you understand the question correctly and helps you to think deeply about the question, allowing you to come up with some great ideas.

它確保你正確理解問題，並幫助你深入思考問題，讓你想出一些好主意。

So let's paraphrase the question, certain individuals think that normalized tests of english like E.

是以，讓我們來解析一下這個問題，某些人認為，像E這樣的英語標準化測試。

While opponents argue these exams are necessary for communities, which side do you think is right and why?

雖然反對者認為這些考試對社區是必要的，但你認為哪一方是正確的，為什麼？

There are many ways to paraphrase, just make sure that you have about 60 to 70% replacement of the original question at least 60 to 70% Fine.

轉述的方法有很多，只要確保你有大約60％至70％的替換原題，至少有60％至70％的精細。

Now let's go to step two, this is a skill you have to practice at home.

現在讓我們進入第二步，這是你必須在家裡練習的技能。

Number one, identify the topic, identifying the topic means identifying what we are discussing, what we are writing about.

第一，確定主題，確定主題意味著確定我們在討論什麼，我們在寫什麼。

In this case we are writing about standard english exams.

在這種情況下，我們要寫的是標準英語考試。

Now second, identify the controlling idea or controlling ideas.

現在，第二，確定控制性思想或控制性思想。

That means the ideas which are targeting the topic.

What are we discussing about these standard english exams?

我們在討論這些標準英語考試的內容？

In this case the controlling ideas are standard english exams are just to make money or standard english exams have usefulness for society.

在這種情況下，控制思想是標準英語考試只是為了賺錢，還是標準英語考試對社會有幫助。

Now, in our next step for planning we can think critically about the topic and the controlling idea.

現在，在我們下一步的計劃中，我們可以對主題和控制思想進行批判性的思考。

This means asking what why, how for the topic and asking what why, how for the controlling ideas.

這意味著要問什麼，為什麼，怎麼做為主題，問什麼，為什麼，怎麼做為控制性的想法。

Okay, so first let's ask what why and how about the topic?

好吧，那麼首先讓我們問一下這個話題的原因和方式？

These are exams designed to measure the language ability of a student, Why do we have these exams?

這些考試旨在衡量學生的語言能力，為什麼我們有這些考試？

So we can show the exact level of english proficiency that a person has, How can we do this?

是以，我們可以顯示一個人的確切英語水平，我們如何做到這一點？

Well, the exams test, listening, reading, writing and speaking skills, thereby showing an overall ability for communication in english.

那麼，考試測試的是聽力、閱讀、寫作和口語技能，從而顯示出用英語交流的整體能力。

So now we know what we are discussing in our essay.

是以，現在我們知道我們在文章中討論的是什麼。

Why and how for the controlling ideas, The controlling idea that these exams are just for business, what to make lots of money?

為什麼和如何進行控制性的想法，控制性的想法是這些考試只是為了商業，為了賺很多錢？

Because these exams are expensive and a lot of people have to take them.

因為這些考試很貴，很多人都要參加。

每次考試的費用如何，我們的費用在300美元左右。

Now, let's repeat the same for the other controlling idea, which is these exams are useful for societies.

現在，讓我們為另一個控制性想法重複同樣的內容，那就是這些考試對社會有用。

Society benefits when it's able to measure people's english ability, why?

當社會能夠衡量人們的英語能力時，它就會受益，為什麼？

Because people can function and contribute to society, how, when they have a certain level of english, they're able to do jobs and communicate with others around them.

因為人們可以發揮作用，為社會做出貢獻，如何，當他們有一定的英語水平時，他們能夠做工作，與周圍的人交流。

Now, you have the right idea of step by step planning for a great essay.

現在，你有了正確的想法，可以一步一步地規劃出一篇優秀的論文。

Do you choose english exams are just big business or they have an important function in society.

你選擇英語考試只是大企業，還是在社會上有重要的功能。

In my case, I'm going to argue that they're necessary for communities.

就我而言，我想說的是，它們對社區是必要的。

So, I'm ready to create my thesis statement.

所以，我已經準備好創建我的論文陳述。

The thesis statement will become the most important part of your essay.

論文陳述將成為你的文章中最重要的部分。

It is your argument, it is the writer's opinion.

這是你的論點，是作者的觀點。

It clearly tells your reader what you think and why you think it The thesis should include clear points that will become the body paragraphs for our essay.

它清楚地告訴你的讀者你的想法和你為什麼這麼想。論文應該包括明確的觀點，這些觀點將成為我們文章的主體段落。

Although some people think that standard english exams exist to make money.

雖然有些人認為標準英語考試的存在是為了賺錢。

I believe they are necessary for societies to function efficiently and happily.

我相信它們對於社會的高效和快樂運行是必要的。

This thesis statement clearly shows my reader my position and body.

這個論文陳述清楚地向讀者展示了我的立場和體。

Paragraph one will be about efficient function in society and body.

第一段將是關於社會和身體的有效功能。

Paragraph two will be about functioning happily in society.

第二段將是關於在社會中快樂地運作。

Now we're ready to write the introduction.

A band nine introductory paragraph should have three parts a hook, a background and a thesis.

一個九段式的介紹性段落應該有三個部分一個鉤子，一個背景和一個論題。

Some students here that a hook is not necessary for the I.

有些學生在這裡說，掛鉤對I來說是沒有必要的。

Hook helps your reader and you the writer to clearly show that you understand what you are writing about the Hook has to include the topic.

鉤子幫助你的讀者和你的作者清楚地表明你瞭解你所寫的內容，鉤子必須包括主題。

It should be a simple sentence without mistakes.

它應該是一個沒有錯誤的簡單句子。

Take a look at this example for our question, millions of people worldwide take standard english exams each year it's simple introduces the topic and catches the reader.

看看我們這個問題的例子，全世界每年有數百萬人参加標準英語考試，它很簡單地介紹了主題並吸引了讀者。

Okay now we're ready to write the background.

好了，現在我們準備寫背景了。

The background has two important elements.

One explain to your reader the definitions of the key terms that you discuss in the essay in our case, what is a standard english exam as well?

一、向你的讀者解釋你在文章中討論的關鍵術語的定義，在我們的案例中，什麼是標準英語考試？

The importance of the question why are we talking about the standard english exams and whether their business or for utility.

我們為什麼要談論標準英語考試，以及他們的業務或實用性的問題的重要性。

Here is an example governments and schools around the globe demand that applicants prove a certain level of english ability through the use of exams like E.

這裡有一個例子，全球各地的政府和學校都要求申請者通過使用像E這樣的考試來證明一定水準的英語能力。

All right now we have a definition of what we're discussing and we've explained to the reader why it's important.

現在好了，我們對所討論的內容有了一個定義，而且我們已經向讀者解釋了為什麼它很重要。

Let's just add in the thesis to complete the introduction.

我們就把論文加進去，完成介紹。

I think that they are necessary for societies to function efficiently and happily.

我認為，它們對於社會的高效和快樂運作是必要的。

Now you have a band nine introduction, Take a look when it's all together.

現在你有了一個帶九的介紹，當它全部在一起時，請看一看。

This is how it reads millions of people worldwide take standard english exams each year governments and schools around the globe demand that applicants prove a certain level of english ability through the use of exams like I.

這就是它的讀法，全世界每年有數百萬人参加標準英語考試，全球各地的政府和學校要求申請人通過使用像I這樣的考試來證明一定的英語能力。

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