While other parts don't well, you can improve those dull sentences if you think about how you structure them.

雖然其他部分沒有做好，但如果你考慮一下你的結構，你可以改善那些沉悶的句子。

There are two voices in writing, active and passive and the active voice, the subject of a sentence.

寫作中有兩種聲音，主動和被動，主動聲音，是句子的主語。

Acts like Neil Armstrong walked on the moon theatrics of voices direct, clear and easy to read with the passive voice the subject is acted upon like the moon was walked on by Neil Armstrong.

像尼爾-阿姆斯特朗在月球上行走一樣的行為聲音直接、清晰、容易讀出被動語態主語是行為，如月球是尼爾-阿姆斯特朗行走的。

Although the passive voice is still grammatically correct, it typically doesn't carry the same energy or clarity as the active voice.

雖然被動語態在文法上仍然是正確的，但它通常沒有主動語態那樣的能量和清晰度。

For starters, it's structure Canfield, clumsy and unnatural, which makes your writing harder to read.

首先，是結構坎場，笨拙不自然，這讓你的文章更難讀。

It also tends to use more words than the active voice over the course of a document.

在文檔的過程中，它也往往會比主動語態使用更多的詞彙。

All those extra words can make your writing drag.

所有這些多餘的字都會讓你的寫作變得拖沓。

Here's how to spot the passive voice.

下面就來看看如何發現被動語態。

Look for phrases like was visited, has been cleaned or will be built.

尋找諸如被訪問過、已被清理過或將被建造的短語。

Each one has a two beaver like was, has been or will be.

每一個人都有兩隻狸子一樣的曾經，已經或將要成為。

That's followed by an action that's already happened, like visited, cleaned or built, the person or thing doing the action comes last if they're mentioned at all.

這後面是一個已經發生的動作，比如參觀、清潔或建造，如果提到了做這個動作的人或事，他們就會排在最後。

If you see these parts together, there's a good chance the sentence is in passive voice.

如果你看到這些部分在一起，很有可能這句話是被動語態。

Overall, we recommend using the active voice mawr often than the passive.

總的來說，我們建議使用主動語態mawr的頻率高於被動語態。

This will help keep your writing snappy and efficient.

這將有助於保持你的寫作速度和效率。

Here's how to change a sentence from passive toe active and this example Jacob is our subject, and tossed is the verb.

下面是如何把一個句子從被動變為主動，這個例子中Jacob是我們的主語，tossed是動詞。

Just move Jacob to the beginning of the sentence, cut out unnecessary words and rearrange a few others.

只要把Jacob移到句子的開頭，刪掉不必要的詞，重新排列一些其他的詞。

Now the money was tossed into the air by Jacob Becomes Jacob tossed the money into the air.

現在，錢被雅各布變成了雅各布把錢扔到了空中。

The delivery is briefer, clearer and more immediate.

傳遞的內容更簡短、更清晰、更直接。

Although active voice is incredibly useful, the passive voice is occasionally the better choice.

雖然主動語態非常有用，但被動語態偶爾也是更好的選擇。

For instance, you may go passive if the actor of a sentence is unknown or irrelevant.

例如，如果一個句子的行為人不明或無關緊要，你可以走被動。

In this case, we're interested in the amendments.

在這種情況下，我們對修正案感興趣。

Approval.

準許：

Not who approved.

不是誰準許的。

Um, passive voice is also great for creating an authoritative tone.

嗯，被動語態也很適合營造權威的語氣。

It doesn't matter who requires employees to wash their hands.

誰要求員工洗手都無所謂。

They just need to wash their hands.

他們只是需要洗手。

You may also want to go passive when you don't know who's responsible for the action.

當你不知道誰是行動的責任人時，你也可能要被動地去做。

For example, the mystery was never solved.

比如，這個謎團一直沒有解開。

The voice you use convey ca big difference in your writing.

你使用的聲音在你的寫作中傳達了ca大的區別。

The active voice will often add pep and clarity, but occasionally the passive voice will be your best option.

主動語態通常會增加氣勢和清晰度，但偶爾被動語態會是你的最佳選擇。

Take some time to choose the voice that fits best and you're writing will almost certainly grow stronger G c F global creating opportunities for a better life.

花一些時間選擇最適合的聲音，你的寫作幾乎肯定會變得更強大G c F全球為更好的生活創造機會。