i am a graduate of Harvard University, and a managing editor, here at Top Admit Consulting.

我畢業於哈佛大學且擔任TopAdmit的總編輯

Last year nearly three-quarters of a million students from arond the globe applied to colleges and universitles here in the United Stated.

去年，來自全球接近75萬學生來申請美國大學

The admissions process is becoming even more competitive.

入學申請變得更加競爭

Right now, admissions officers are being inundated with well-qualified applicants.

現在，招生委員會已經被許多非常符合條件的申請者淹沒了

Students that have impressive G.P.A.'s, very good class rankings, and outstanding test scores.

那些擁有令人驚豔的GPA、班級排名高、以及出眾的申請考試成績

But ultimately, the most important part of the applications process is the admissions essay.

但最重要的申請關鍵之一，是你的申請文件

This is the story of you.

這是你的故事

It needs to be more than just a collection of grammatically correct sentences.

這個申請讀書計畫和短無不能只是由一堆文法正確的句子組成

That's important, of course, but it won't gain you admission to the college of your choice.

當然，這也很重要! 但卻不會為你開啟理想學校的大門

You need to create a dynamic, inspiring narrative about who you are as a person. Your background.

你必須要寫出關於你是誰、背景

What makes you unique, what you have accomplished and what you intend to accomplish.

什麼使你特別、你曾經完成什麼以及你的目標的一份活躍且鼓舞人心的故事

Ultimately, the admissions essay is your argument.

畢竟最終，申請文書是你的論述

Your argument to the committee as to why they should admit you instead of the thousands of other well qualified applicants.

你的論述來說明為何招生委員必須選擇你而不是其他成千上萬的優質候選者

Top Admit Consulting can help you with that.

TopAdmit可以幫助你

We employ professional editors who themselves have been through the process.

我們雇用曾經經歷過這激烈申請程序的的專業編輯

Editors who themselves have graduated from Harvard, Yale, Columbia, Stanford.

從哈佛、史丹佛、耶魯、哥倫比亞大學畢業的編輯

We know the admissions process, and that the admissions committees wants to see, and that they do not want to see.

我們了解申請過程、招生委員會想看到的以及不想看到的內容

We can help transform your writing into an interesting narrative that helps you stand out from the thousands of other applicants.

我們可以幫您的文件在不失去原意下，包裝成吸引人的故事，讓你可以在人海中脫穎而出

I would encourage you to contact us at out website

我建議您上我們網站聯絡我們

www.topadmit.com

www.topadmit.com

You can learn about the services that we provide.

你可以了解更多我們的服務

not just help with admissions essays, but also help with scholarship applications, recommendations or resumes.

不只有申請文件還有獎學金申請、推薦信、履歷表

Ultimately, I encourage you to contact one of our professionals

更建議你聯絡我們專業的客服

so we can tell you how we can improve your chances of gaining admission to the college of your choice.

好讓您了解我們能夠增加多少你獲得入學許可的機率