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  • Hello. It's Chris from IELTS Daily

  • and welcome back.

  • We have a wonderful video.

  • We're looking at Jed part two today.

  • If you've already seen his video part one,

  • don't forget that you can also see other students

  • such as Talia and Tom and Saskia

  • lots of opportunities for you to learn things

  • So today we're looking at  grammatical complexity

  • and using higher kind of language lexical features

  • So let's start

  • As usual, we will be looking in depth on the features that Jed uses

  • I'm going to be stopping the video occasionally

  • to talk about how he does really well

  • and the things that he could improve

  • Don't forget that just because Jed is a really high-level speaker

  • doesn't mean that you can't aim for this.

  • We're going to be applying the band descriptors at all times 

  • as we always do

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  • and love to hear about it.

  • So, let's begin.

  • Hello.

  • and welcome to this practice  exam conducted by IELTS Daily

  • My name is Maddie and I'm your practice examiner.

  • The questions in this test are designed  to simulate the IELTS speaking test

  • Let's start.

  • What's your first name please?

  • Jedidiahf

  • Thanks Jedidiah

  • I want to begin by talking about you.

  • Do you enjoy studying?

  • Yeah, I definitely enjoy studying

  • I think I have done a lot of it

  • over the course of my studies

  • even in university

  • and I think the best part about it is knowing

  • having that sense of confidence on exam day

  • and when you get your results knowing

  • that you tried your best

  • Okay.

  • So in Jed's speech,

  • he uses something called a compound complex sentence

  • orcomplex compound sentence

  • You need to know about simple  compound and complex sentences

  • and there's lots of materials on the internet for you to read about

  • That's not the purpose of today's class.

  • In his speech,

  • he says "when you get your results"

  • which is a complex sentence

  • and then he continues

  • then he says "and making your parents proud"

  • So he tries to use this idea of complex sentences

  • which is when joining it with an and sentence

  • and making it a compound sentence or a complex compound sentence

  • We're looking for a range

  • and a variety of complexity in his speech.

  • This is a great start.

  • Is it important for you to learn new information?

  • Yeah, definitely.

  • So as humans, I have...

  • I have a firm belief 

  • that we should be constantly learning

  • and evolving throughout our whole lives

  • and that's a... 

  • I think that my dad has always taught me

  • and i've learned from many different mentors

  • So, definitely yes

  • Learning is very important

  • Two things I want to say here

  • both really positive

  • The first one is that he gives this really well rounded answer.

  • He gives him his thought

  • then he gives an example

  • and then he makes this concluding statement at the end

  • I don't know if you notice,

  • go back and watch it again.

  • It's this extremely kind of sophisticated answer

  • where he's putting forward his point

  • and then concluding it at the end

  • Super work.

  • Promise you, he never knew these questions in advance.

  • None of the students actually knew the questions in advance

  • and it was all kind of adlib on the day.

  • The second thing I want to talk about is collocation.

  • If you don't  know what collocation is,

  • it can come in different forms

  • and in this case,

  • he uses something calledcompound noun

  • and he said "a firm belief"

  • So the "firm belief" is using two words which fit together

  • and you could see

  • If you see on the screen

  • strong belief

  • so we have a firm belief andstrong belief

  • and those mean the same thing.

  • If have a firm belief andstrong belief in something.

  • You can also have other collocations  when it comes to the word "belief".

  • You can have a "genuine belief".

  • I have a genuine belief and a sincere belief.

  • So those four words firm, strong, genuine,

  • and sincere are all different ways

  • that you can fit words together

  • and you have to be able to use those really flexibly

  • to reach above a band seven

  • that we're probably looking at a band eight

  • If you wanted to know the subtle differences between those.

  • Great use of the word "firm belief" there  

  • Which subjects do you prefer?

  • I prefer the most science-based subjects

  • just because I feel like

  • I'm more analytical as opposed to a creative

  • I struggle with drawing

  • and more artsy things like that

  • So, yes definitely I prefer the... 

  • the more mythological methodological  approach

  • that science takes

  • Three things I want to talk about in this case

  • and the first one is as "opposed to"

  • this is a great feature of thinking about ideas

  • I like something as opposed to something else.

  • You're recognizing that you are good  at one thing

  • but not so good at another

  • So using this language as opposed to as opposed to 

  • Now, the second thing that I want to talk about is his pronunciation

  • and he makes a slight mistake here

  • but he self-correct which is wonderful

  • he used the word methodological

  • Methodological.

  • and it's actually really difficult

  • even for a native speaker to say

  • As I as you just noticed

  • if you make a mistake on a pronunciation feature

  • Don't worry try to do it again

  • and if not,

  • don't spend too much time worrying about it

  • It's only a very small part of a big speech

  • So there's one thing that he did really well there

  • he took a mistake and he corrected it

  • Wonderful.

  • The final thing that I wrote down in this case

  • was the fact that he used science-based subjects

  • which is one way to talk about something

  • and then he flexibly used a different way to make this adjective

  • So when we have science-based subjects

  • we're using "science-based" as an adjective

  • It's describing.

  • Then, he used the word "artsy subjects"

  • and adding the letter "y" on the end of words

  • can very often create an adjective

  • Solike science-based subjects

  • but i'm not so good at artsy subjects.

  • You could even say "sciency subjects"

  • and that's a great feature of a very high level speaker

  • and that would probably be pushing  the band 9

  • using those adjectives in such varied ways

  • Really great.

  • Okay.

  • Let's move on to the topic of sleeping.

  • Do you fall asleep easily?

  • I do.

  • I...

  • as soon as I hit the pillow

  • I'm the type of person to just fall asleep sleep straight away

  • and I amvery heavy sleeper

  • So I love my sleep

  • Did you notice here that Jade's pronunciation

  • and this is something that Jackson talked about in his video

  • There are a number of different features of pronunciation.

  • One of which is this inflection and intonation

  • and rising and falling

  • The examiner asked him a question.

  • Do you fall asleep easily?

  • and he says "I do"

  • Did you notice that he's placing emphasis

  • and he's really showing the examiner kind of his feelings on something

  • and that's a feature of band nine

  • flexible use of pronunciation

  • and I use this word "flexible" a lot

  • because it's featured in the band descriptors

  • and flexible use of grammar

  • flexible use of language and flexible use of pronunciation features

  • it means using them without even thinking about it

  • The other thing that I wanted to talk about was his language.

  • "as soon as I hit the pillow"

  • as soon as I hit the pillow

  • Idiomatic high level language

  • Great work.

  • Do you ever find it difficult to fall asleep?

  • Yeah at times when I've had a long day

  • and maybe when I've had a role with someone

  • or some type of interpersonal conflict

  • I tend to think about it a lot

  • Okay back again sorry to interrupt

  • Two things here,

  • one good and one thing to improve

  • Now, the first one which is great

  • which is "when I've had a long day"

  • We're starting to see this variety in the complexity of sentences.

  • Wonderful.

  • when sentences are complex sentences

  • the second thing is the word "r o w"

  • Do you know how to pronounce the word "r o w"?

  • You'll see it on the screen now.

  • Well, this is something called a homonym.

  • A homonym is a word

  • which can be pronounced in different ways

  • or it's two words which are pronounced the same way.

  • So, we have homographs and homophones.

  • Learn more about them because you do need to know.

  • English pronunciation can be very difficult

  • when it comes to how words are written.

  • So let's focus on this word

  • which is the word "rou̇" or it's the word "rau̇".

  • In Jed's speech, he actually uses the word "rou̇"

  • which comes

  • which is related to the sport of rowing on the water

  • In fact, I think he wanted to say the  word "rau̇"

  • which explains an argument

  • or it means an argument

  • So, I'd want to hear this "ow" sound a little bit more "rau̇".

  • If we look at the band descriptors together now,

  • it doesn't make any reference to pronunciation problems at a band 9.

  • It says effortless to understand

  • sustains flexible use

  • and full range of pronunciation features at a band 8.

  • It does say sustains flexible use of features

  • with only occasional lapses.

  • Now, my question to you guys is what is this?

  • What does it mean only occasional lapses?

  • I received a lot of criticism in Saskia's video

  • because she said the word advertisement

  • and I marked her down because of that.

  • I genuinely think a strict examiner

  • would be looking for these lapses

  • these slips in pronunciation

  • So be prepared for a very strict examiner

  • because words like "rou" and "rau"

  • that examiner on that day could say

  • that was a lapse

  • should have known better band eight

  • I just want to warn you.

  • That's all.

  • I'm not an examiner,

  • so I don't know the the subtleties

  • but I do think that you should be prepared

  • for those little things.

  • Learn about homophones, homographs, homonyms.

  • Let's continue.

  • or like maybe if I have a big presentation

  • or event next day

  • I'll often sort of just analyze what it is that I..

  • I want to say or do at that event

  • so that keeps me up yeah

  • How many hours do you normally sleep for and why?

  • I definitely aim to get around seven to eight hours of sleep every day.

  • I would even sacrifice study time

  • or leisure time just for sleep

  • because I know it's very beneficial

  • to how I feel the next day

  • how concentrated I am

  • how nice I am to people

  • So, yeah definitely.

  • I love the part at the end

  • where he he's makinglist

  • and then he has a kind of joke with the examiner.

  • So he's making a list

  • and then says "how nice I am to people"

  • and did you notice again

  • it's this pronunciation feature of this inflection

  • intonation

  • putting stress on words

  • to emphasize them

  • I love that.

  • Great answer.

  • He maintained control and flow throughout.

  • No major pauses.

  • He could speak a little bit faster

  • but I think that

  • I think an examiner would be very kind to him

  • and say that all his speech is sustained,

  • the features are great,

  • he answers the questions with an explanations.

  • Really really difficult to find fault at the moment

  • Now, I want to talk about making decisions.

  • Are you good at making decisions?

  • I'm so so.

  • Sometimes when it comes to personal decisions,

  • I'm very quick and very calculated about it

  • but if it involves other people,

  • I prefer a more democratic approach.

  • So, I'll always be asking like

  • what do you think about this

  • what do you want to do

  • how do you feel

  • and so I can be slow

  • if there are others involved.

  • Did you notice that in this section he starts with the phrase "I'm so so"?

  • I'm not entirely convinced

  • that when we ask a question

  • such as "Are you good at making decisions?"

  • that a native speaker would would answer "I'm so so"

  • We would probably answer "hmm so so" rather than "I am so so".

  • So I'm being very very very critical here.

  • I'm nitpicking.

  • That's what an examiner does.

  • Just be prepared.

  • I'm going to give him the benefit of the doubt here.

  • I loved the fact

  • that he tells the story on one hand

  • that he uses his hands

  • and says

  • and tells

  • he's like an actor

  • he points this way

  • and then he points this way

  • Lots of you asked me about

  • "Can we use handed gestures during the test?"

  • Absolutely!

  • There is nothing in the band descriptors

  • which prohibits you from doing that.

  • If you are comfortable doing it, absolutely do it!

  • You might find your tutor in your country tells you that you shouldn't  

  • this is completely wrong

  • You are very welcome to use your hands

  • during the test

  • and what types of decisions do you make every day

  • I make a lot of decisions on a daily basis.

  • Most of it has to do with food because I love food

  • and cooking is really fun to me.

  • So I'll take the time to decide

  • what it is that i want to prepare for today's meal

  • So yeah

  • Now one of the things you should be doing in the test

  • is to think about paraphrase

  • where you say something in a slightly different way

  • In this example, Jed uses a great case.

  • The examiner asks him something about every day

  • and he changes the language

  • and actually says on a daily basis

  • which is great from him.

  • The other thing that I want to talk about

  • is he makes a very very very minor grammatical mistake

  • and I'm going to give him the benefit benefit of the doubt here

  • because native speakers do this all the time.

  • He said "most of it has to do with food"

  • and he's talking about decisions, okay?

  • Decisions are plural

  • and so you would actually have to say to be correct

  • "Most of them have to do with food"

  • "Most of my decisions have to do with food"

  • but you will find that native speakers

  • make this mistake all the time

  • even I do it

  • when I would say something like

  • "There's many reasons why"

  • "There's many reasons

  • and that would be

  • "there is many reasons why"

  • and correct as...

  • a grammatically correct sentence goes

  • you would have to say

  • "There are many reasons why"

  • There are many reasons why

  • but you will find that many many many native speakers would say

  • "there's many reasons why"

  • and that would be an example of a typical slip for abandoned

  • where an examiner would give you the benefit of the doubt.

  • Other decisions that I make on a daily basis

  • are probably to do with exercise

  • I like to plan out my routines

  • but i'll vary them from day to day

  • So yeah.

  • Wow

  • So we've said every day on a daily basis

  • and suddenly he comes up with

  • "I'll vary them from day to day"

  • which is a different way to say every day

  • and he also uses a pronunciation feature called weak forms

  • "I'd like to"

  • which is which is great

  • and i just want to bring that to your attention

  • and I've made a video on pronunciation features as a live class

  • Go back and watch that.

  • Make sure that you take part in that class

  • because I talk about all the different pronunciation features that we have  

  • Overall, in part one he gives great answers.

  • He continues

  • he expands

  • he elaborates

  • he talks at length

  • Wonderful.

  • I'm going to give youtopic

  • and I'd like you to talk about it for one to two minutes.

  • Before you talk,

  • you'll have one minute to think about what you're going to say.

  • You can make notes if you wish.

  • Here is a paper and pencil for making notes.

  • I am just going to interrupt here

  • because I have a confession

  • and this has been spotted by a couple of students.

  • When we were making these videos,

  • the wonderful Maddie who is a friend of mine

  • and she's an actor.

  • Maddie was given a script

  • and she follows the script to the tee in English.

  • We say to the tee

  • she follows it really in detail

  • and I'd written the script

  • and I said

  • "here's a paper and a pen"

  • Now, somebody noticed that actually this is grammatically incorrect

  • and it was a mistake of mine in the script.

  • So I'm very sorry Maddie.

  • This is not your fault.

  • It's it actually should be

  • there's here's a piece of paper andpen

  • or we could say

  • here's some paper

  • I remember when i wrote the script

  • I actually wrote "here's a piece of paper and a pen"

  • and I removed a piece of paper

  • and I I just kept in our paper

  • So I'm really sorry about that.

  • Well spotted for anybody who did spot that.

  • Remember that paper is uncountable

  • and we wouldn't normally say "here's a paper"

  • unless it's a newspaper.

  • Actually you could say "here's a paper for you".

  • So a bit little piece of advice there

  • and a little bit apology from me

  • I'm really sorry.

  • and here is your topic

  • I would like you to describe a time when you were disappointed.

  • You have one minute.

  • While Jed's preparing here,

  • this topic ofdisappointment could be really difficult

  • So be kind of thinking of these ideas

  • positive things and negative things

  • before you go into the test

  • and if you really struggle,

  • my best piece of advice is to make something up.

  • Think about some like

  • as if you were writing a play ortv show

  • and think about somebody

  • who would be disappointed by something.

  • It could be something as wild as I proposed to my partner

  • and they said no

  • and that was a real disappointment

  • and you could make up the most elaborate story.

  • It is okay to be kind of creative during your test.

  • Don't worry if you have to invent a story

  • Okay.

  • Remember you have one to two minutes for this

  • so don't worry if I stop you

  • I'll tell you when the time is up.

  • Can you start speaking now please?

  • Beautiful.

  • So I remember at time very vividly

  • when I was really disappointed.

  • It was...

  • was at school with all of my classmates

  • we were...

  • we even though school was closed that day

  • we all came because our IGCSE marks

  • were being released that day

  • and we wanted to be in an environment

  • where we could support each other

  • if we were feeling down

  • or like celebrate with each other

  • and so the marks came out

  • and I don't know this is kind of...

  • it might it might be a little bit pretentious

  • but I was really  disappointed I got 89 in A math

  • because that was like an additional mathematics subject that

  • because of schooling and like moving around country to country

  • I had a huge disadvantage in

  • I missed all of the basics

  • but I struggled really really hard

  • I took a lot of additional classes to try to catch up

  • and like be at a level in additional mathematics where my friends were  

  • So yeah.

  • A lot of my studying for that exam was on additional mathematics

  • just because I was so weak in it

  • and I started feeling more and more confident about it

  • come exam day I was pretty confident

  • but there was one question that was really easy

  • that I knew how to do in and out on a normal day

  • but on exam day, I sort of panicked

  • and I completely messed up that question

  • and so that took that one precious mark away from me

  • and so I would have had a a clean a clean sheet on my IGCSE's with all a stars

  • but that one mark kind of messed me over

  • So yeah looking back at it

  • I I think I am still very glad to have hit 89

  • just considering how far behind I was at the start of the year

  • but I still I feel satisfied now looking back at it

  • Great.

  • Thank you.

  • Unbelievable.

  • Did you notice how Jed stopped at the two-minute mark?

  • What a great example of a speech.

  • I feel like he had a a timer in his brain.

  • I promised there was nobody there telling him the time.

  • Let's look at some of his language

  • which I'd written down

  • and you'll see on the screen here.

  • We've got it was

  • "I remember it very vividly very vividly even though"

  • it's an even though sentence

  • which is a great example of complexity complex language

  • when I was feeling down

  • or if somebody is feeling down

  • if they're feeling depressed

  • which is a phrasal verb

  • "When the marks came out"

  • That's another example of a phrasal verb.

  • To catch up is another example of a phrasal verb.

  • So using these types of less common language during your test is great

  • just to show your the examiner

  • the flexibility of your speech

  • In the middle of the test,

  • He said "so yeah "

  • and then he starts to reflect on his ideas.

  • He said "So yeah come exam day".

  • Come exam day which meant on exam day.

  • He used an in and out a clean sheet

  • All fantastic pieces of lexical resource to get well above a band seven.

  • I'm looking inband eight

  • or probably a band nine here.

  • Looking back at it,

  • this is some language

  • that you could use during your test.

  • So looking back at it

  • if you're remembering something,

  • you tell a story

  • and then halfway through your story

  • so looking back at it

  • and then you just share your ideas

  • and share your feelings of how you perceive that time now

  • Looking back at it you know

  • what did I learn from it

  • how would I do it differently next time

  • and what would other people do

  • and what did other people think

  • and these are all questions

  • that you could use when you're answering your test

  • Now, let's talk about solving problems.

  • Why do some people find it easier to overcome problems than others?

  • I think it's a lot to do with the mindset of people.

  • Some people have a growth mindset

  • where they look at challenges as something that they can overcome

  • given enough hard work and the support from family

  • and friends and things like that

  • but with others they have a mindset

  • where they see challenges as threats that may undermine them

  • and sort of in a more pessimistic light

  • and so often challenges stop them

  • from actually getting started on trying to overcome that challenge

  • Yeah

  • In this response, I'm always really impressed with how Jed composes

  • and gives this very detailed answer.

  • It's a very well-rounded answer.

  • On the screen here,

  • you'll see some of the ideas

  • and the language that I think was very impressive.

  • So you'll see

  • "It has a lot to do with"

  • "It has a lot to do with"

  • "A growth mindset"

  • somebody who's always very positive

  • given enough hard work

  • given the details

  • given the the consequences

  • So using this word given is is a great connective

  • and like a cohesive device

  • which is wonderful

  • and do you think people benefit from life coaches?

  • life coaches

  • I've never had one personally

  • so I wouldn't be able to tell you out of personal experience

  • but I know a lot of

  • I...

  • I have a lot of mentors

  • and I know a lot of people that have mentors

  • and mentors are sort of similar to life coaches

  • and for mentors yes definitely.

  • Sowould imagine life coaches

  • would be very helpful in sort of helping

  • you understand where you are at in life

  • and like if you need any advice on maybe interpersonal conflict

  • or your career

  • or things like that

  • they would be able to help

  • So I would say yes.

  • Did you notice that Jed freely admits in this case

  • that he doesn't have much experience

  • and that very may well be the situation for you

  • when you do the test

  • It's not always the case

  • that we have examples to  give from our own experience

  • but what we can do is we can find connections

  • and things which relate to that topic

  • So he says

  • "Well I don't have much experience with life coaches

  • but I do have experience with mentors"

  • and then starts talking about how mentors have aided him

  • and helped him through his life.

  • He gives these very complete answers

  • which are kind of summarized at the end with a little conclusion

  • Try and work on those types and styles of answers.

  • It's something that you really could benefit from.

  • Jed's a great example here.

  • Do men and women differ when it comes to solving problems?

  • Hmm that's a that's a good question

  • I I think it would be

  • it's a controversial question I would say

  • but from what I know,

  • I would say yes

  • Just generally,

  • I feel like guys tend to take a more sort of analytical approach to problems

  • where they look at the problem

  • and try to sort of go at it

  • at the angle of just like trying to fix it

  • without really thinking about like what the consequences are

  • whereas from my female friends,

  • when they're trying to solve a problem

  • they tend to take everyone's feelings into account

  • and like how they would react to the solution  

  • and i think that's also a really  really good way to solve problems  

  • I think it's a better way personally.

  • Thank you very much.

  • That is the end of the speaking test.

  • I I love the fact at the end

  • where he says "I think it's a better way personally"

  • adding his little kind of opinions on subjects is it's wonderful

  • It's a great use of language.

  • It's so natural

  • and so kind of well thought out

  • and I as I say I promise

  • we did not prepare students with these questions beforehand

  • It's completely new for them.

  • So, this reaches we've reached the end of the part three.

  • Typical part three might belittle longer

  • and one thing which I would say to you

  • that during the test

  • because Maddie is not an official examiner

  • you may find that your examiner interrupts you more

  • during part three

  • They'll say why or why not

  • and why do you think that.

  • So be prepared for some kind of interjection

  • where the examiner is going to be asking

  • and making you

  • putting you on the spot

  • and making you feel like you haven't answered enough

  • Totally normal during part three.

  • That's the reason why we have part three.

  • It's so that people can kind of get their opinions in.

  • Now, what score would I give Jed?

  • and you will see that the marking the band scores are on the left.

  • For me, I'm going to score nines across the board.

  • I'm not going to mark him down.

  • If there's anywhere that he might be marked down,

  • it would probably be beyond the pronunciation,

  • the little slip that he made.

  • A very very very strict examiner would be nitpicking

  • and finding little mistakes like that

  • but I'm as kind as I can be

  • following the band descriptors

  • and I would see that

  • as I still understood what he wanted to say

  • he still had great flexibility

  • and control of his pronunciation features

  • So I'm maintaining and I'm going to support my band 9.

  • He gave great answers in the fluency

  • and coherence section.

  • He spoke at length on his answers.

  • His lexical resource

  • his vocabulary was wonderful

  • He gave I've given you lots of good examples of

  • when he gave high level flexible

  • not language which isn't as common

  • and finally he used a wide range of grammatical structures.

  • He didn't make any mistakes throughout

  • which was wonderful.

  • Big thumbs up.

  • A band nine for Jed.

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雅思9分範例&評析(Band 9.0 IELTS Practice Speaking Exam (mock test) - with teacher feedback - Jed from Myanmar ??)

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