Name: IELTS Writing Task 1 - Two Maps Diagrams - FULL
Uploaded: 2022-04-28T16:55:24.000Z
Duration: 8 min 26 s

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本課是一篇比較兩張地圖或圖表的任務一學術論文，現在想了解更多類似的課程，包括六次原始練習考試和互動課程，以及超過100小時的視頻課程，包括例子、策略和技巧，以幫助你在下次考試時通過，請訪問我們並加入我們的高級完整課程：www dot a help point com。

So of course your first step in task one is to read the question carefully.

是以，你在任務一中的第一步當然是仔細閱讀問題。

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

你應該花大約20分鐘來完成這項任務。

The maps below show the town of Summer's Ville in 1960 and 2010, summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relevant.

下面的地圖顯示了1960年和2010年的Summer's Ville鎮，通過選擇和報告主要特徵來總結資訊，並進行了相關的比較。

好的，所以任務一將有三個部分。

The overview, couple of sentences, the analysis, 6-10 sentences and a summary about one sentence.

概述，幾句話，分析，6-10句話，總結大約一句話。

Now for the overview, all that you need to do is paraphrase the question and add some more details.

現在，對於概述，你需要做的就是轉述問題，並增加一些細節。

That's one sentence and for the second sentence, just give the overall most observable main feature.

這是一句話，對於第二句話，只要給出總體上最能觀察到的主要特徵。

Let's take a look at the mats and see how that looks.

讓我們來看看墊子，看看這看起來如何。

Okay, here's the paraphrase these two maps depict the settlement of Summers ville in 1960 half a century later in 2010 Notice the added detail of half a century, which is 50 years later.

好吧，這裡的解析是這兩張地圖描繪了1960年的薩默斯維爾的定居點，半個世紀後的2010年，注意到半個世紀後的補充細節，也就是50年後。

Okay, the second sentence when looking at these two maps, we can clearly see that the town of summerville has developed in both infrastructure meaning roads and bridges as well as the number of people meaning more houses, more residents.

好的，第二句話，當看到這兩張地圖時，我們可以清楚地看到，薩默維爾鎮在基礎設施方面的發展，即道路和橋樑，以及人口數量，即更多的房子，更多的居民。

So let's put that together in one sentence for the overview.

是以，讓我們把這些放在一起，用一句話來概述。

At first glance, it is clear that summer's Ville develops as a town in these 50 years, there's more infrastructure and housing a decade after the turn of the century.

乍一看，很明顯，夏天的維爾在這50年裡作為一個城鎮發展，在世紀之交的十年後有更多的基礎設施和住房。

Okay, now we're ready to go to the analysis, but before we do, we need to look at the two maps and indicate our points of comparison.

好了，現在我們準備去分析，但在這之前，我們需要看一下這兩張地圖，並指出我們的比較點。

This is the same as for any graph or chart circle, the points of comparison on both maps, the biggest circles will usually be the most important features and the smaller circles will be the less important.

這與任何圖形或圖表的圓圈是一樣的，兩張地圖上的比較點，最大的圓圈通常是最重要的特徵，小的圓圈是不太重要的。

Okay, so when we circle the roads on these two mats, they clearly are the biggest change in these 50 years In the original map, there's one main road with two smaller roads extending from it.

好的，所以當我們在這兩張墊子上圈出道路時，它們顯然是這50年中最大的變化 在原始地圖上，有一條主路，有兩條小路從它延伸出來。

However, in 2010, we can see two additional main roads and some additional smaller roads.

然而，在2010年，我們可以看到另外兩條主路和一些額外的小路。

Okay, next, when we circle the houses, we see this as also a large circle, easily a second point, or it could be the first up to you.

好的，接下來，當我們把房子圈起來的時候，我們看到這也是一個大圓圈，很容易成為第二個點，也可能是第一個由你決定。

There are more houses in 2010 than in 1960.

Next, when we circle the cattle, we realize that this is also a significant change In 1960, the cattle are found in the southeastern region of town, but by 2010, they're up in the northwest.

接下來，當我們把牛圈起來的時候，我們意識到這也是一個重大的變化。1960年，牛群出現在城鎮的東南地區，但到了2010年，牛群就出現在西北部。

Finally, we can circle the school, the boat and the dock on the lake.

最後，我們可以把學校、船和湖上的碼頭圈起來。

These are smaller circles, so they're less significant and can come later in the analysis.

這些是較小的圓圈，所以它們的意義不大，可以在後面的分析中出現。

If you run out of time and don't mention these points, you can still get a great score.

如果你的時間用完了，沒有提到這些點，你仍然可以得到一個很好的分數。

Here's an example of how in 1960 The town had one main road with two small roads running north and south and east and west, respectively.

以下是1960年的一個例子 該鎮有一條主幹道，有兩條小路分別貫穿南北和東西。

However, five decades later, there are two additional streets running from north to south on the east and west side of town.

然而，五十年後的今天，在城鎮的東西兩側又多了兩條從北到南的街道。

Both these new roads cross Burns River and better connect the two halves of the village as well.

這兩條新路都穿過伯恩斯河，也更好地連接了村莊的兩半。

There is another small avenue which connects the original main road to the school and lake Furthermore.

還有一條小路，連接著原來的主路和學校及湖泊 此外。

The additional houses seen in 2010 indicate that the number of residences has grown since the 60's originally homes can be seen only in the southwestern region of town.

2010年看到的新增房屋表明，自60年代以來，住宅的數量有所增長，原來只在城鎮的西南部地區可以看到住宅。

Conversely, by 2010, there are residents living in the southeast and northeast parts of town where livestock and trees were found in the past.

相反，到2010年，有居民居住在城鎮的東南部和東北部，那裡過去有牲畜和樹木。

The animal pastures have been relocated to the northwestern part of summers ville where greenwood forests used to extend Some of the other notable changes in the 50 years is the construction of a dock.

動物牧場已被遷至薩默斯村的西北部，那裡曾有綠林延伸。 50年來，其他一些值得注意的變化是建造了一個碼頭。

In addition to the new two new bridges that Cross Burns River.

除了新的兩座橫跨伯恩斯河的新橋之外。

Okay, now you're getting close to finished.

好了，現在你已經接近完成了。

Don't forget about the summary, although you can get a good score without a summary, it is nice to include one and it might just bump you up that .5 band.

不要忘了總結，雖然沒有總結也能得到一個好的分數，但包括一個總結是很好的，它可能會使你提高0.5分。

Here's an example summary, it's somewhat of a paraphrase of the overview or perhaps an additional main feature that we haven't yet discussed.

這裡有一個總結的例子，它有點像對概述的轉述，或者說是我們還沒有討論的一個額外的主要特徵。

The development of summer's ville in these five decades is clearly observed in the expansion of roads and residences as well as additional facilities.

從道路和住宅的擴建以及額外的設施中可以清楚地看到夏日村在這五十年中的發展。

Alright, so now you're done your essay This task one is a little bit over 200 words.

好了，現在你已經完成了你的論文 這個任務一有點超過200字。

That means you have to write at least 150 words to get a full task completion mark.

這意味著你至少要寫150個字才能得到一個完整的任務完成分數。

It is a better idea, especially for students going for those higher bands 758 or nine to have an essay.

這是一個更好的主意，特別是對於那些要考高分段758或9分的學生來說，有一篇文章。

That is between 100 and 80 and 200 words with more detailed description.

也就是100到80字之間，200字以上的詳細描述。

Okay, notice a couple of important points in our task.

好的，注意我們的任務中有幾個重要的點。

One response firstly there's a lot of paraphrasing for redundant information Such as 50 years, half a century, five decades.

一個反應是，首先有很多轉述多餘的資訊，如50年、半個世紀、五十年。

Also there are strong connecting words like conversely in addition, furthermore, the directions are used.

此外，還有一些強有力的連接詞，如conversely in addition, furthermore, the directions are used.

Any time you see a compass on the map, it's a good idea to use that when you're describing North, east, south, north eastern, southwestern.

任何時候你在地圖上看到羅盤，在描述北、東、南、東北、西南時，都是一個好主意。

Alright, make sure to practice these skills at home before you sit your next exam because in case you get a compared to maps or diagrams type question, this will surely help you reach your desired band scores.

好了，在你參加下一次考試之前，一定要在家裡練習這些技能，因為萬一你遇到比對地圖或圖表類型的問題，這肯定會幫助你達到你想要的分數段。

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