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  • it's now we finished this the first supporting paragraph.

  • We can move on to the second supporting paragraph if we look back to our introduction paragraph for a moment.

  • We just finished the 1st 1 the first supporting paragraph about how restaurants, arm or convenience, then eating at home.

  • And so the second, supporting Paris is going to talk about how restaurant food is tastier than the food that we can cook at home.

  • So no, just give us a little title supporting paragraph two.

  • Okay, so supporting progress to supporting her up to is talking about how restaurants are tastier than the food we cook at home.

  • So we might start with.

  • Second reason is that's restaurant food always tastes better.

  • Then the food I cook.

  • Um, So, um, I am not talented.

  • Sure by any stretch, and the food's I cook never turn out the way I planned.

  • Okay, so now an example to support This could be perhaps a humorous time in the past, when we tried to cook something and it didn't turn out properly.

  • So maybe, for example, I often overcooked foods to the points that's the are unpalatable, which just means, um not pleasant so I cooked foods the point where they're not pleasant.

  • Okay, now a discussion sentence.

  • So, like we were saying before the discussion sentence must link this example to our supporting Ah, our story.

  • Our topic for this supporting paragraph two.

  • So we would write something along the lines of maybe for this reason palatable.

  • For this reason, restaurants, restaurant food is consistently a taste your option.

  • And is there for another reason why I prefer buying for buying my meals to preparing them?

  • Okay, s So what I've done here is I've combined our discussion sentence with our conclusion sentence.

  • I joined them into one sentence.

  • So here we have.

  • For this reason, restaurant food is consistently at taste.

  • Your option.

  • That's the discussion that's linking our example.

  • Because we say for this reason, and we're linking that to the topic, and then the, uh, the end of the sentence says s.

  • So it is there for another reason.

  • This is there for another reason why I prefer buying my meals to preparing them at home.

  • So because restaurant foods taste year, I prefer buying my meals to making them myself at home.

it's now we finished this the first supporting paragraph.

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A2 初級

雅思筆試作文從頭到尾(第3部分,共4篇)。 (IELTS Written essay from start to finish (part 3 of 4))

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    林宜悉 發佈於 2021 年 01 月 14 日
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