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  • So what you get with my IELTS Writing

  • Correction Service?

  • Well, let me show you an example of a

  • piece of writing that i recently marked. I

  • used google docs to do the corrections

  • and it's really easy for you to use. On

  • the left there's a list of contents which

  • you can click through to see the

  • different parts of your essay. So let me go

  • back to the top again. At the very top

  • there's a little welcome message here

  • and then we have the essay question here

  • and then the student's writing is in

  • black, so we've got paragraph 1,

  • paragraph 2, paragraph 3, and so on, and my comments are

  • under each paragraph in red so you can

  • see that my comments here about the

  • introduction, here are my comments about the

  • first paragraph...the second paragraph and

  • so on and in these paragraphs I usually talk

  • about things like ideas and also perhaps

  • the structure of the essay,

  • some general ideas

  • You will also see lots of highlighted

  • text in the essay and if you click on

  • the different parts of the

  • click on the different highlighted text, you'll

  • see some comments on the right hand

  • side that will suddenly pop up

  • OK? So there's comments usually about

  • language also maybe spelling, grammar,

  • so the smaller corrections are on the

  • right-hand side with these comment on

  • the right.

  • So for example here's one comment..I've talked to you

  • about grammar: the first conditional

  • and how to form the first conditional

  • I've also made some good comments about

  • good language that the student has used

  • there as well. If I go further down, then

  • you'll see the examiner's report, my IELTS

  • examiner's report which is based

  • around the 4 assessment criteria used

  • by IELTS examiners, so that's task response

  • task achievement for task 1,

  • coherence and cohesion, lexical resource,

  • grammatical range and accuracy and I've

  • given the student here a band score

  • for each of these 4 assessment

  • criteria with a comment as to why I've

  • given this band score and then some

  • suggestions for how to improve in each

  • of the 4 assessment criteria,

  • and sometimes also some links for more

  • information on this particular area and

  • then down at the bottom the band score

  • summary with the overall band score at

  • the bottom, so I've given this student

  • 5 for task response, 6 for coherence and

  • cohesion and so on. When i finished making

  • the corrections to your essay I will

  • send you an e-mail and in the email

  • there will be a link which you can click

  • on and that will take you to your page

  • in Google Docs so you can look at all the

  • corrections I've made, all the comments

  • to your essay, and you'll be able to download all

  • the corrections and print it out. If you

  • purchased more than one essay correction

  • from the IELTS writing correction

  • service, then in the email I will simply

  • say to you

  • ok soon as you're ready with the next

  • essay email it to me and I will correct

  • that as well because you do not need to

  • send me all of your essays at the same

  • time so if you purchase the 3 essay

  • correction package, you can just send me

  • one essay at a time and that will be...

  • I recommend that because it means that

  • you can use the...my suggestions, my

  • corrections from one essay to help you

  • improve your next essay, so it's a very good

  • way of helping you improve your IELTS

  • writing very quickly. So there you are, then!

  • This is what you get with my IELTS

  • Writing Correction Service. A very

  • detailed, very thorough correction, it will give you

  • lots of suggestions for improving your

  • writing

  • and it will help you get the best band

  • score possible in the shortest possible

  • time.

So what you get with my IELTS Writing

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雅思寫作改錯 (IELTS Writing Correction)

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