字幕列表 影片播放 列印英文字幕 So what you get with my IELTS Writing Correction Service? Well, let me show you an example of a piece of writing that i recently marked. I used google docs to do the corrections and it's really easy for you to use. On the left there's a list of contents which you can click through to see the different parts of your essay. So let me go back to the top again. At the very top there's a little welcome message here and then we have the essay question here and then the student's writing is in black, so we've got paragraph 1, paragraph 2, paragraph 3, and so on, and my comments are under each paragraph in red so you can see that my comments here about the introduction, here are my comments about the first paragraph...the second paragraph and so on and in these paragraphs I usually talk about things like ideas and also perhaps the structure of the essay, some general ideas You will also see lots of highlighted text in the essay and if you click on the different parts of the click on the different highlighted text, you'll see some comments on the right hand side that will suddenly pop up OK? So there's comments usually about language also maybe spelling, grammar, so the smaller corrections are on the right-hand side with these comment on the right. So for example here's one comment..I've talked to you about grammar: the first conditional and how to form the first conditional I've also made some good comments about good language that the student has used there as well. If I go further down, then you'll see the examiner's report, my IELTS examiner's report which is based around the 4 assessment criteria used by IELTS examiners, so that's task response task achievement for task 1, coherence and cohesion, lexical resource, grammatical range and accuracy and I've given the student here a band score for each of these 4 assessment criteria with a comment as to why I've given this band score and then some suggestions for how to improve in each of the 4 assessment criteria, and sometimes also some links for more information on this particular area and then down at the bottom the band score summary with the overall band score at the bottom, so I've given this student 5 for task response, 6 for coherence and cohesion and so on. When i finished making the corrections to your essay I will send you an e-mail and in the email there will be a link which you can click on and that will take you to your page in Google Docs so you can look at all the corrections I've made, all the comments to your essay, and you'll be able to download all the corrections and print it out. If you purchased more than one essay correction from the IELTS writing correction service, then in the email I will simply say to you ok soon as you're ready with the next essay email it to me and I will correct that as well because you do not need to send me all of your essays at the same time so if you purchase the 3 essay correction package, you can just send me one essay at a time and that will be... I recommend that because it means that you can use the...my suggestions, my corrections from one essay to help you improve your next essay, so it's a very good way of helping you improve your IELTS writing very quickly. So there you are, then! This is what you get with my IELTS Writing Correction Service. A very detailed, very thorough correction, it will give you lots of suggestions for improving your writing and it will help you get the best band score possible in the shortest possible time.