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  • Hello, everyone. I'm George.

    大家好,我是George。

  • Today let'stalk about how to do your autobiography in English for college.

    今天我們來談談如何做大學備審的英文自傳

  • Okay. I have a lot of students who are ready to go to college.

    我有很多學生都準備要上大學了

  • They just finished their biggest test in their life.

    他們剛完成人生中一次非常重大的考試

  • If you're one of them, I sincerely wish you good luck.

    如果你是其中之一,我誠摯的祝福你

  • So maybe you are now ready to prepare for your portfolio,

    或許你正在準備你的備審資料

  • including a lot of your report cards from senior high school,

    包含你的高中成績單

  • or certificates that you get to prove your abilities.

    或是證明你的能力的證書

  • and there is one thing that my students are preparing right now.

    還有一樣文件是我的學生正在準備中的

  • That would be the English autobiography.

    那就是英文自傳

  • It is not required by a lot of departments,

    雖然不是很多學校要求

  • but it's alwaysnice if you can include something in English into your portfolio.

    但是如果可以在備審資料中加些英文的內容總是好的

  • You know you can impress professors when they see a whole page of English.

    你知道的,教授們看到一整頁的英文會多印象深刻

  • So today, we're just gonna tell you how to make English autobiography.

    所以今天我就來告訴你如何做英文自傳

  • And there are some things you really have to pay attention to.

    有些事情你要特別注意喔

  • I'm not gonna tell you step-by-step how to do it,

    我不是要告訴你做自傳的細節

  • There are just some tips that you have to know.

    而是有一些撇步是必須要注意的

  • And I have prepared three tips that you really have to listen to,

    我準備了三個小提點你要仔細聽喔

  • if you are preparing for your autobiography.

    特別是如果你正在準備自傳的話

  • Here we go. Number One.

    我們開始吧,第一。

  • I know a lot of times when people ask you to do your autobiography,

    我知道每次要做自傳的時候

  • you're gonna talk all about your family members,

    你都會提到你的家人

  • like how many brothers or sisters you have,

    像是有多少兄弟姊妹

  • or what your brothers or sisters are doing right now,

    或是你的兄弟姊妹現在在做什麼

  • or your parents' jobs.

    或是你的父母的工作

  • It could fill up the space for that A4 page you're preparing,

    這是很好的塞滿整頁A4紙的方式

  • but don't you think it is too much to just always mention your family members?

    但你不覺得每次都提到家人有點太多了嗎?

  • My suggestion is, your family members are crucial to your life.

    我的建議是,你的家人對你有多重要

  • We get it. Everybody's family members probably play a very important part in their life.

    我們都知道的。每個人的家人都有一定的重要性

  • However, if your family members' jobs or what they're currently doing

    但是如果家人的工作或是現在在做什麼

  • has nothing to do with what you are right now or the department that you're trying to get into,

    和你自己的現狀或是你要進入的科系沒有關係的話

  • then just leave them alone. You don't have to mention all of them.

    就放他們一把馬吧!不要提他們了

  • The point is why are you writing something that nobody wants to read,

    重點是,為什麼要寫出別人不想讀的

  • or after they read it, they think is a waste of time.

    或是讀了之後覺得浪費時間的內容呢?

  • The professors are more interested in you not your family members,

    教授們感興趣的是你,不是你的家人

  • unless your family members are super rich,

    除非你的家人超有錢

  • or super prominent in society. No No No.

    或是超重要。。。不不不。。。

  • That is still cheating. Don't do that.

    這樣是作弊,不要這樣做

  • So when you're doing your autobiography, try to leave your family members alone.

    所以當你在準備自傳時,放過你的家人吧!

  • Don't always mention them. You can probably talk about

    不要總是提到他們。 你可以談談

  • how many members you have in your family, but don't give us any details that is not required.

    家裡有多少人,但是不要給太多不必要的細節

  • And let's move on to Number Two.

    我們繼續看第二個

  • This is also very common when I am reading students autobiography.

    這也非常常見。我在看學生的自傳時

  • They want to tell me all about their childhood,

    他們會想要告訴我他們的孩提時期

  • their school life

    他們的學校生活

  • ,how they were born,

    他們何時出生的

  • where they got their first scar.

    還有各個傷疤的歷史

  • I get it if you say that you want to tell everybody about everything that happens in your life.

    我能夠理解你想要告訴大家所有發生在你生活周遭的事

  • But don't you think it is going back too much?

    但是你不覺得這樣回溯太多了嗎?

  • You're applying for college,

    你申請的是大學

  • which means anything that is before your senior high school life

    意思是任何在你高中之前的事

  • is probably not required,

    大概都不太必要提

  • unless it's something that is nationally or internationally important,

    除非是有全國或是國際重要性的事

  • Don't mention it.

    否則就別提了吧

  • We don't want to know if you are the best students in your elementary school,

    我們不想知道你國小是好學生

  • or you're a kindergarten life.

    或是幼稚園乖寶寶

  • You might be a very good boy or a good girl,

    你可能是個好寶寶

  • but we care more about your senior high school life.

    但是我們更在乎你的高中生活

  • For example, what kind of clubs that you've joined?

    例如你參加了什麼樣的社團

  • What kind of special abilities you acquired in senior high school?

    你在高中學到了什麼特殊的專長

  • They are more to the present, which means they are the things that you should mention.

    他們比較近代,意思是這才是你應該提的

  • Don't dwell on the past too much. Don't trace back too much.

    不要沈耽往事,不要提當年勇

  • And let's move on to Number Three.

    我們繼續看第三個

  • I know you've probably accomplished a lot during your school life.

    我知道你在學校可能成就了許多事情

  • For example, if you were number one in a speech contest,

    例如你得到了演講比賽第一名

  • or you had some kind of scientific experiments, and you

    或是你在某個科學實驗中

  • you made a big breakthrough.

    然後你有什麼樣的突破

  • I know therewere a lot of things that you want to mention in your autobiography

    只我知道在自傳中有許多你想要提到的事

  • because you want people to know,

    因為你想讓大家都知道

  • but think about it.

    但想想看

  • If you are talking about how good you were as a student, like you always aced your tests,

    如果你想要告訴人你是個好學生,例如你的考試都特優

  • then your report cards would say everything.

    那麼你的成績單不是都說了嗎?

  • So just try to mention those things that are relevant.

    所以只要提相關的事情就好

  • For example, if you are going to an English department,

    例如,如果你要申請進入英文科系

  • mention anything that is language related.

    就提些語言相關的內容吧

  • Don't talk about your math competition,

    不要提數學競賽

  • or your science experiments.

    或是你的科學實驗

  • They're not relevant. It is always recommended that for your English autobiography,

    他們沒關係吧!我們建議你的英文自傳

  • You have to make sure that everything fits into an A4 sized page,

    最好是能夠在一張A4大小的紙就好

  • so that is why we have to make sure that whatever you write down is necessary.

    所以這就是為什麼你寫的內容都要盡量是必須的

  • You might have a really colorful senior high school life.

    你的高中生活可能過得多采多姿

  • You might have won hundreds of prizes during those years,

    你可能在高中曾得過上百個獎項

  • but those things that are worth mentioning

    但值得提的應該是

  • should be the ones thatare relevant to whichever department that you are applying for.

    那些有關你要申請的科系的就好

  • So notice that unless it's gonna amaze people,

    所以要注意,除非能夠嚇到人

  • you don't have to mention them.

    沒關係的都不用提

  • You want people to look at that simple piece of paper,

    你希望人們看到那張自傳時

  • and know as much as possible about you.

    能夠馬上盡量多了解你

  • So those are the three tips that I think might help you when you are doing your English autobiography.

    這些就是這次提到做英文自傳時的三個要注意的事項

  • Leave your family alone.

    放過你的家人吧!

  • Don't trace back too much.

    別提當年勇!

  • Be relevant.

    注意相關性!

  • Of course maybe in your Chinese autobiography you have to do the same thing.

    當然或許在中文自傳中你也要注意一樣的事

  • I don't know. You might have to ask your school teacher.

    我不知道,你可能要問學校老師

  • For the English autobiography, as an English teacher, I just want to make sure that

    但是英文自傳,身為一個英文老師,我要提醒你

  • you want to get the professors interested in you, so keep it short,

    你希望能夠讓教授們對你感興趣,所以簡短有力

  • and make sure that everything in your autobiography can catch their eye.

    然後讓教授們看到你的自傳後能眼睛一亮

  • So if you like this video,

    如果你喜歡這個影片

  • make sure you click the like button down below,

    記得要在下方按個讚

  • or you can subscribe to this channel.

    或是你也可以訂閱我的頻道

  • I'll see you next time. Bye

    我們下次見囉

Hello, everyone. I'm George.

大家好,我是George。

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